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Reviews for Angels Aren’t Born…They are Built

By : AmberDDawn
  • From moodysavage on December 04, 2011
    This story is sooo good!!! Is the real Naruto dead and gone and the angel a part of his personality? Or is it just a fluke that he is like Naruto and the real Naruto will eventually come back and this Naruto will fall for Itachi? Arggg!!! Write more please!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hime on March 06, 2011
    This story is really good! I gotta love how there's SO many possible outcomes! I'm looking forward to the next chapters; checking every day actually..^^ I can't wait.^^
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  • From ANON - Jen on January 31, 2011
    Yay, a new chapter! Sasuke is STILL being a fool, despite what he thinks. He feels bad for whatever he did to human Naruto? Well, he can't make up for it by being nice to robot Naruto since as he knows, they are different people. Human Naruto is the *only* person to whom he can atone for whatever his crimes were. And when he talks about doing things better "this time," it shows that he hasn't completely separated robot Naruto from human Naruto since there is no "this time" with robot Naruto, this is the first and only time. Robot Naruto should play matchmaker and bring human Naruto back into Sasuke's life so they can settle their heartbreak.
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  • From Cinder1013 on January 30, 2011
    What a great story! How did Orochimaru come to make this Naruto double? Is the real Naruto still alive? If so, what does he think of this?
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  • From ANON - YaoiWhore on January 30, 2011
    Very good concept and your writing flows together, I actually enjoyed it and that is saying a lot because normally I do not read SasuNaru. However you might want to consider enlisting the aide of a beta, a story that has poor grammar and punctuation only takes away from how good it is.
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  • From ANON - grava on December 06, 2010
    sooo... really good story. What happened to the real Naruto?
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  • From xXxXxRoxasFanGirlxXxXx on November 23, 2010
    o.O ... this is a true masterpiece so far, and keep up the good work


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  • From ANON - Jen on November 22, 2010
    Human Naruto sounds like such a great character! I love a really smart Naruto. He sounds like the perfect match for the Sasuke in this story. What happened to him? I really, really hope the romance in this story ends up being between Human Naruto & Sasuke just because the two of them have all that history together, not to mention, it always seems more than a little unfair to both people when someone falls in love with a person who resembles his/her dead (or otherwise absent) loved one. Even if Sasuke says the robot is nothing like Naruto, he still went ahead and gave him his name, which says a lot about how he still feels about human Naruto and how difficult it would be to separate human from robot Naruto for him. -_- But besides that, bringing human Naruto into the story would mean you'd have two Narutos running around, which would be seriously, seriously cute! (Would they argue with one another or get along together like peas in a pod?) Well, that's just my two cents. BTW, I thought it was rather cute that Hinata was married to Shino for once instead of Kiba. Finally, Shino gets the girl. :)
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  • From sekebondagefeykoinu on November 07, 2010
    Since you're just testing this story out does that mean you're not continuing? It's really good.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on October 19, 2010
    erm wow :s i would have preferred more sasuke and naruto interaction rather than that long and descriptive scene with kimi et al I'm used to reading stories focused on sas and naru though maybe this one isnt? i dunno, i just didnt like that it took up so much of the chapter

    neways that aside i look forward to the rest its interesting and wanna see how this 'angel' naru/ real naru thing works out
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  • From ANON - Jezabel-Swan on October 17, 2010
    Very, very intriguing story! I love the concepts in there as well as the process and time taken to introduce the scene of the story and the characters. Very well done, you have a capturing writing style as well. I'm a large NaruSasu so I sort of hope that's how this will go...but Sasuke is giving off Seme signs...so SasUKE might be off the cards hmm?
    Regardless, this story has brilliant potential, I hope you continue, I send you inspiration vibes!!!!

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  • From ANON - Anonymous on October 17, 2010
    I've really enjoyed reading this story. The thing that draws me in is that there is apparently a human Naruto, or was one, and then there is the android Naruto. I'm wondering will they ever meet. Which one represents the Naruto we all know and love? Based on the fact that the other android swore that she was Tsunade, are the two Naruto one and the same, and Orochimaru is actually more twisted than we gave him credit for? I'm assuming all of these questions will be answered as the story goes on. I am concerned about the rape scene in this chapter. Based on Orochimaru's work we all understood that he was a creep, so I'm not sure if the detail was necessary. Implying it, and then showing more interaction between Naruto and Sasuke would have flowed better with the other chapters, imho. But please keep on posting, because you have a great story.
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  • From NarutoVixin on October 11, 2010
    i love this tale ill be waiting for the next chapters
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  • From niceladysakura on October 10, 2010
    thanks for updating!

    huurai, Naruto already appears...hmm..so what happen to the real Naruto?

    please update soon
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  • From niceladysakura on October 09, 2010
    wow! interesting story

    please update soon, i hope that this is a Sasuke and Naruto Story
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