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Reviews for Bound

By : Savagehunger47
  • From ANON - Mariah on January 19, 2013
    Love it!!!!
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  • From SilentShadows101 on October 22, 2011
    cruel cruel ending. Love it please update soon!
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  • From ANON - moonprincess90 on August 17, 2011
    woot a new chapter!!!! and it was great can't wait to see whats going to happen now that Tobi is there.
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  • From Silvryfang on August 01, 2011
    Darn you and that evil cliff hanger of yours! I was so happy you updated that i was reading it hungrily as a giant dog tried to naw my arm off for ignoring him. I think i might have scared him with my glare when i saw it was over hahaha. By the way if you couldn't tell by my loss of my arm, i love this story :3
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  • From Dreamfool on July 27, 2011
    What the hell is it with Uchihas that automatically make them want Naruto. They should form a support group. Even Itachi wants to keep him as an Uchiha trophy. At least that's the vibe I'm getting from him.
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  • From jaskolka on July 22, 2011
    Great fic so far. I love the idea of Naruto being bound to Sasuke and the story of how he got into that situation.
    I also enjoy his impish character and the contradiction between his cheekiness and fragility. And the possesive Sasuke rocks;)

    Still, I would love to see some more development in the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke. Something that goes beyond bickering back and forth followed by sex. I guess that would be coming later, haha. It also appears to me that Naruto could be feeling more distraught by being forced to remain in the mansion. After all that must have been a huge disappointment to him. On the other hand maybe you just didn't want to make him the brooding, angstying type.

    Anyways, I loved this fic and hope that you will not drop it!
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  • From ANON - richon on July 15, 2011
    oh no nair, sharigan is a powerful eyes. Hopefuly sasu will find you before tobi made a move. This story is awesome !! see you soon
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  • From moodysavage on July 12, 2011
    arrgggg!!!!!!!! Naruto you should have ran! This is tense and he's SOOOO not safe away from Sasuke.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on July 12, 2011
    Woha! you updated! So f-ing great! And hey, I always say that better short chapter than no chapter at all!

    PS. My name may be long but the meaning...says it all! YAOI is all I need.
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  • From alexxgalaxy on July 12, 2011
    The boys obviously cared about and had feeling for each other. Sasuke might have fallen in love with Naruto. As to Naruto, umm, don't think so. For what he had been through his whole life, it's unlikely for him to let his guard that easy. Sasuke was such a moron! He should have got down his high horse, like yesterday. By far he still hadn't figured out Nauto wasn't going to listen to him with his ass "attitute". Didn't he know how ridiculous it sounded to tell Naruto not to do something just because he said so? Sigh, I guess he didn't know...Shoot, I hope the Toby guy wasn't an enemy of Sasuke though I doubt he had fans in his family.
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  • From ANON - Silvry on April 22, 2011
    Im so hooked! The way you opened it and just the whole set up are amazing. I really want to see what happens with orochimaru... shivers... its like I could feel the tension. And I also love how you gave a slight hint to how Sakura might not be as bad as she may at first appear. Love it and cant wait for more :3
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  • From NeckNac8 on April 21, 2011
    Epicness, I love how you brought another crazy bitch to replace Sakura
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  • From ANON - moonprincess90 on April 14, 2011
    WOW its been a long time sents I've read a good Naruto fic. You've done a GREAT job! ^_^ I'm looking forwards to the next installment. You've done a fantastic job with this story.
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  • From ANON - richon on April 13, 2011
    troubles are coming becarefull naru orochimaru is not a good man hopefuly sasu will protect you
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  • From ANON - Jen on April 13, 2011
    I feel the same way as alexxgalaxy: the only thing tying Sasuke and Naruto together at this point, besides their bond, is lust. That was OK at the beginning, but now we're already 8 chapters in, yet nothing at all seems to have changed between these two: Naruto still wants his freedom, Sasuke still wants to keep Naruto as a plaything, and both of them still think the other is hot.

    I feel like at this point in the fic, they should be starting to move beyond that and at the very least, be showing an interest in getting to know one another--for any kind of relationship, that's the minimum first step. But they aren't. Instead, they spend large amounts of the fic avoiding each other (or rather, Naruto avoiding Sasuke), and then when they DO interact, they're either fighting or fucking. Unfortunately, they can't make any progress as a couple that way. (If they can't even hold a normal conversation...) Beyond the fucking, do they like one another, or even find one another tolerable as a person? Right now, that seems debatable. Add in everything that's currently against them, including Naruto's own feelings, and there's not much here to base a relationship on.

    If the goal of the fic is for Naruto to get his freedom, walk away and never look back, then the progress between them is fine. If Naruto is actually supposed to end up with Sasuke, then Sasuke needs a little more development (his motives are pretty unclear--can't really support him being with Naruto until we understand what he's trying to do and why) and their relationship needs to start progressing.

    Don't get me wrong: I do like the fic. I like it very much, in fact. I think it's a hilarious story overall and I always enjoy reading each chapter. Naruto is a fabulously witty character in this, and I was impressed that you managed to make initially unlikable Sakura into a more sympathetic character. I also love all the plot twists and turns--I wasn't expecting Orochimaru to show up or for Kyuubi to disappear. (I actually really liked that plot twist, as sad as it was for Naruto, because in the end, Naruto needs to be the one to decide what he's going to do about Sasuke/about his life without always relying on Kyuubi.) It's just that the romance isn't quite working for me yet.
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