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Reviews for Iyoku (Desire)

By : drivven
  • From Demoninmysoul on December 04, 2011
    Oh my GOD!!! So sexy, so hot! I WANT MOREEEEE!!!!!! Please, please continue this story somewhere somehow!!! I thought I'd end up like Sasuke with the lap dance! And those three rounds in the first part - I didn't read this long and still so good one ever! It just got hotter and hotter, and them doing threesome and I just want to see them more, and Sai fucking with the brothers mind and wanna see them succumb, and be tortured and Sai owning them, and, and, and everything!!!!

    So good, thanks!
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  • From smint45 on January 05, 2011
    That was absoloutly Hot!!!! I loved it!!!
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  • From NarutoVixin on July 03, 2010
    loved it i would like to see a one shot that is about 6 months out that would be the best topper for this tale
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  • From ANON - Carousel on July 02, 2010
    Brilliant and hilarious and hot and amazing.
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  • From Prism0467 on July 02, 2010
    This totally makes up for you not finishing The Choices Between Friends.
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  • From FairyNiamh on July 02, 2010
    *Faints* Gawd your sex scenes are SMOKING HOT and dirty. Love love love them and love you too sis!
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  • From Kerrisa on July 02, 2010
    That was ridiculously hot!! Omg Naruto is a BEAST xD!!!!!! AHHHHHHH I loved it I loved it I'm hooked I need more soon!! A wanton needy Neji is a great thing! I am soooo curious who the third lover will be!! So far, not enough hints! Sasuke could be a possibility... but right now Neji doesn't even like him and then there's Ino.. Shika is taken.... Kiba's status is unknown for now, Choji seemed more interested in his dinner and I kinda just remembered Shino was even present! Ahhhh!! so many unknowns!! I hope you update soon this fic is totally capable of epic greatness!!!


    XOXOXs
    Kei-Chan
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  • From Twiggies on June 26, 2010
    So hot! Can't believe it!
    Hehe, I've always liked Neji as a stripper, even in this fic, where it's not as traditional.
    Gosh, Naruto really pounded Neji good! Just too sexy!

    And Sasuke was just too amusing! Repressed, and in the closet.
    He was all too eager to go to the club too.

    SO TBC? I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From Carousel on June 17, 2010
    By all that is holy....hot damn. That was the most...That was hot. More. Please.
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  • From jordash00 on June 16, 2010
    If I could carry a tune, I would sing a song pledging my undying loyalty as a devoted fan!

    As always, it is a pleasure to see your name under the "author" tag by a fic as much as it is a pleasure to read your writing. Whether or not your are "back" in full swing I don't know, so I will not make any assumptions; however, I will say that my cheeks ached when I saw that you posted again. I also screamed a hearty, "HELL YEA!"

    Regarding the fic, splendid as usual and I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From butterflies1974 on June 16, 2010
    I can't wait to read more. And I love that you have done a Neji and Naruto story there just isn't enough of them. Thank you for a great story.
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  • From Prism0467 on June 16, 2010
    It is good to see you again, DL.
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  • From FairyNiamh on June 16, 2010
    Love the story dear and can't wait for part 2! Happy writing!
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