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Reviews for Where on Earth...

By : ruby12
  • From ANON - Jess on July 13, 2010
    I like! I would love to read more, and you are doing great for a first time! Very interesting story.
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  • From LadyWolf on July 04, 2010
    Me Like! Me like!!

    More please??!!?!?!?!
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  • From CrazyLarmo on June 13, 2010
    This looks promising as a story, but I recommend elaborating more, you seem to rush through topics or repeat ideas in the same paragraph, and i noticed several grammar errors and run on sentences. See if you can get someone to proofread your chapters or get a Beta.

    But i look forward to future chapters and hope you continue to grow as an author.
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  • From Cindyip on June 12, 2010
    Looks really promising, I look forward to seeing this AU Naruto...what about the AU Sasuke will he be there as well?
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  • From noit on June 12, 2010
    I think this is nice.
    But Sakura is out of character. I would hope that she would be more considerate.
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  • From tovah on June 11, 2010
    I think it is an ok beginning but it is way to short in length.
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