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Reviews for Family Obligation

By : bob665
  • From Trandoshan on May 31, 2010
    I never thought that I would find a story with Hinata/Hanabi pairing that is somewhat serious and yet full of siblings love and sex, and what do you know? It's this one! :) I already read both chapters, but... somehow... could you please consider writing a third chapter? Where Hanabi would overcome her, well, barriers and please Hinata as she was pleased by her? I understand if you won't, could you just please think about it? And thank you for what you wrote so far, it's one of my most favourite stories about Hinata.
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  • From shingen on March 03, 2010
    cool story, it would be nice to have a few scenes in which their mother watches Hinata and Hanabi have sex. update soon.
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  • From UltimateFucker on March 02, 2010
    Very interesting story so far, I hope you'll post more soon.
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  • From DragonMan220 on January 17, 2010
    Very interesting start. I can't wait to see how Hinata's sexual training of Hanabi goes.
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  • From Georsama on January 17, 2010
    Ah, finally, a Hanabi/Hinata story that's worth reading. Great job on this, very nicely written and thought out, the characterizations fit splendidly as well.

    Now, before I forget, you have one or two words that don't fit: 'removed the abstraction to her final goal.' is the most notable one. Also, you used a lot of 'she' and 'her' and at times that made things a little confusing but not terribly so.

    Anyway, great job, I truly enjoyed it, and out of curiosity will there be more chapters or is this it?
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  • From ANON - Grazi on January 17, 2010
    Continues Interessante
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