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Reviews for Just One More Birthday

By : xtabluarasa
  • From ANON - anon on August 11, 2016

    This is such a good story! I can't wait for Naruto to come out of his coma.


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  • From ANON - Sara on September 11, 2010
    I really like this story... I'm a sucker for serious drama. Add a little BL, a little romance, and realistic dialogue and you've got me. So... I definitely need more of this story. If I have to review it every day for a year... well I'll probably miss a few days, but I will do my darn best to let you know that you MUST finish it. ;)

    Keep up the good work. I know how much a review helps with creativity. Well you have something wonderful here and I want to see how you handle it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2010
    This subject is a tough one to tackle. From what I have read so far of this story, it is beginning to capture the despair, depression and hope of the main character and some of those who care about him. I hope to see how things will progress with a potential new relationship with Gaara (who stood by his friend in the worst of times) as well as see the fleshing out of the other characters in Naruto's life.
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  • From ANON - akinohanun on January 12, 2010
    this story is really good and cute... i cant wait to read more of when naruto comes out of the coma and dumps neji and goes with gaara.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2010
    I really liked this chapter. Epsecially Gaara's fight with the clock...and naruto's commentary on Sakura's little life-rants. And a chapter that ends in good news, is always a good thing. ^_^ Update when you get the chance
    ~CP
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on January 11, 2010
    Hurray for remission! A real eyeopener, this fic. Looking forward to reading the next update.
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  • From sleeplesssama on January 11, 2010
    This is a great story. Please continue. Hope you get better soon.
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  • From RREADERR on January 11, 2010
    Beutiful!!!!! Especially the part which Gaara had a battle with the clock. I was clutching my stomach trying to stop laughing! Very very impressive oh and UPDATE QUICKER *gets embarrassed like Hinata and looks away mumbling* if... You have... The time.. Ofcourse...
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  • From arabuzumaki on January 11, 2010
    Aa chapter that ends in good news is always a good chapter ^_^
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  • From ShikaChouFan4Life on January 11, 2010
    I just thought that I would let you know that while I might not comment on every chapter, I am loving this story so far. Every since the first chapter, I have been eagerly awaiting the next.
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  • From Kingcobra on January 11, 2010
    Good chapter. I liked it.
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  • From on January 10, 2010
    Omg! I feel bad for Naruto! All his friends left him! Love this story by the way :)
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  • From ANON - xmc@pneumonia.sick.hq on January 10, 2010
    i'm not much of a reviewer, but for the sake of updates on this story, here i am, offering up my homemade cookies, erm, i mean my unworthy opinion/review. (puts cookies away)
    to say that i like ur idea/plot would be an understatment, b/c i love it. its safe to say i'm addicted to this storyline and would be devastated if it was discontinued later on. my cookie-making skill would suffer too.
    so for the sake of my cookie-making skills, and my future victums, um, i mean cookie-tasters, don't abandon the story lol
    but in the meantime, have a cookie for a job well done. (hands u a chocolate-walnut cookie)
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  • From Fluister on January 09, 2010
    ah, wow. very good! I love the way you describe Naruto's feelings and thoughts in this story. Heh, and I like Gaara. I'm curious about the next chapter!
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  • From RREADERR on January 09, 2010
    You have to continue this! You explained everything so well it reminds me of my sleep paralysis I experience constantly. Please, please continue!!
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