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Reviews for Open Case

By : Inigeshi
  • From ANON - lividangel on January 07, 2010
    Ha:) that was cute...and I think a pretty darn interesting concept.
    original, thanks:)
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  • From ANON - Anise on January 06, 2010
    I loved it! :) I especially liked Iruka in this plus I really liked the AU setting, I haven't read many lately and this was a great change ^_^ It's too bad it's a oneshot it have been a great setup for a story.

    A couple of little spelling mistakes and I know they're nitpicky but they jumped out while I was reading-
    'Kakashi pressed his forehead to the rough bricks and it down on his lip.' (bit)
    'Kakashi let out a low his as he adjusted...' (hiss)
    I know they aren't that big of a deal but I figured they would be easily fixable, I hope you don't mind me pointing them out :) Great job on the story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2010
    Short but sweet yaoi goodness, I liked it!
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