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Reviews for Demons Have the Most Fun: A Cautionary Tale

By : DevilnBlue
  • From Kerrisa on January 15, 2010
    Shweeee!!! What an action packed story! Not only did you lay down the action, but you added angst!! That scene was terribly heartbreaking!!! I felt for Kyuubi and Iruka D=!! Awe and I have no idea what's going to happen next! I thought it was kind of funny how Mikoto still had a baby monitor in their home, not so funny when Sasuke's screams started filtering through it =(

    Lol had I awoken to read a really depressing chapter threatening to ruin my day, I would have either hunted for more fanfiction to cheer me up, or watch something cute and sweet like Chi's New Home to lighten the atmosphere xD

    I can't wait for the next installment!! XOXOXs Kei-Chan!
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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on January 15, 2010
    There's more to the Kyuubi/Minato story than we know yet, yes? Seems Naruto gets the short end no matter what. *sigh* I'm thinking they'll have to reunite Sasuke and Kyuubi, for Sasuke's sake. I can't say I like this Kakashi much, but maybe I'm just easily irritated today.

    Since Sasuke only gets one shot at a demon (plus he's already marked), and he managed to bond with Nine-tails, I can't see Hiashi letting this go unchallenged. Too much ego there.

    So much to look forward to. ;)
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  • From ANON - anonfood on January 10, 2010
    The prologue is attention getting. I think that it sets up the story well. One thing though: I am not sure of the need for foot notes. These details seem like they could be worked into the story without referencing. While I do not mind scrolling up and down for more information, I do not think it adds to the impact of this story like say it would in a mocking story in scientific format nor do the footnotes impart highly technical information that cannot be gathered from the story. I think getting a more developed insight as a reader into what happened with Mikoto's Guardian would add to the story. In addition, I am not sure of the need to label changes of scene, such as "Back inside the dome". I think that the details inside each section provide enough information that the reader can easily transition without much help. Also, I am not sure that the use of the second-person/"you" perspective at the beginning. The details of the perspective seem mature and detailed for a ten-year old, especially when using comparisons to a lover's cry, although this may relate more to an older-than-ten (hopefully) audience.

    Overall, the prologue is rich in details and plot foundation for a great platform towards a wonderful story. It was very easy to visualize and get involved in events as they occurred. The characterizations as well as the hints of types of bonds between pairings has my interest piqued. I am curious to see the details of pairings and in the possibilities of less-than-balanced relationships. Looking forward to the next part...
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  • From ANON - Benny hanna on January 03, 2010
    I feel... So happy for having read this. It was beautiful and interesting and extremely well written. As a guy, it's rare I find a story I like this much but you really hit the nail on the head with this. The detail is amazing and the posessiveness is adorable and hot at the same time. Please do continue this one, or I'll have to review it 80 times myself to meet your rubric. Thank you so much for this piece, I'm off to read your other works now because of it. Happy new year, and good luck with finding your second job. It's hard enough to balance one with school, I hope you find a way to manage.
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  • From ANON - Lack_Honesty on January 02, 2010
    Hi, loved the first chapter, and I'm also a fan of your story Broken. It's nice to see Iruka as the head teacher. It was surprising to know that Naruto had killed Minato. The whole summoning was beautifully described, can't wait to meet Neji's demon and to find out just how powerful Naruto is. I also wonder if Jiraiya is going to show, and probably he'll have Orochimaru as demon, well I wish so.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2009
    I loved loved LOVED the beginning! Captured my interest right away. The descriptions are detailed and the story plot is new and refreshing. I'm so excited to read the next chapter. You have me hooked!
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  • From ANON - Lando on December 30, 2009
    I simpl LOVE this story it's seems so awsome continues asap!
    Please! From what I've seen your a top of the line writer!
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  • From ANON - morlana on December 29, 2009
    Very nice, a taste of Saiyuki with the limiters. I'm sure TAchi wont' be happy to find that Naru is the dom and I like the fact that they are a mix of Kyu and Naruto. If you have an update list can you add me please? Thank you
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  • From ANON - jellybean on December 29, 2009
    I love you so much for writing this! The whole situation/environment you've created is absolutely wonderful! I'm a sucker for supernatural/fantasy and the demon thing is pretty exciting. (I love how Kisame is Itachi's demon and Itachi's little daydream at the ceremony...KisaIta is my guilty pleasure XD) I can't wait to see how the plot unfolds/I hope you update this soon! I hope that my excessive use of exclamation marks and general fangirling don't annoy you too much...but reading this really made my day.
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  • From Kerrisa on December 29, 2009
    That was AMAZING!! First thing i read when I got up this morning. I am so excited!! I loved Everything!! The rules of the game, Naruto as a badass demon xD *squeal of delight* I just hope Sasuke takes back the reigns and puts his demon er, guardian, in place. As much as I think it would be fun for big bad ol' Naruto to be lil 10 year old Sasuke's master, I think the story would be that much stronger if Sasuke did regain his control, which I'm thinking he will once the bonding bite/mark thing wears off and he realizes his guardian tried to kill his mother and brother. I don't think he's going to appreciate that too much =/ And Yay for Iruka and Kakashi showing up on the scene!!! I'm all kinds of jumping all over the place to see how quickly Kakashi settles things because you know he will xD Lol poor sick Iruka, he wants to sleep, I really don't think he'd let Kakashi draw it out even if he wanted to xD I love love love love this story and look forward to the next update!!! XOXOXs Kei-chan~
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  • From Gingitsune32 on December 29, 2009
    Wow! This is an amazing start to a new fic! Your description of the summoning process & bonding is so vivid it's like I am seeing a movie! Great job & can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on December 29, 2009
    Very cool concept! Vivid details and a great plot!
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  • From nivell on December 29, 2009
    Hmm, this looks really interesting and the way you write humanKisame makes me want to rape him. LOl. The numbers that represent your author's notes is quite annoying because it distracts my attention away from the action. I'd suggest just putting in your author's notes at the end because almost everybody reads it anyways.
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  • From LadyLaran on December 28, 2009
    Told ya it was great! Lol...now, onto the next chappy!
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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on December 28, 2009
    This is fantastic so far. I love the whole concept and Iruka as headmaster is perfect (even though that caught me off guard - it's fitting). I can't wait to see where you take this.
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