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By : erincthomas
  • From ANON - Veslekua on January 02, 2010
    It's sometimes hard to understnd what you're trying to message in your story, by the way you write,
    and it sometimes gets a little boring with too little action/happening (you stay monotonus by writing about a single act/scene).
    Although I've read all your current chp's, I'm still uncertain what your story really is all about
    (yes, I did notice you said in A/N:"It's staring to roll" or something akin to that).
    Your spelling is great, thankfully :) Big plus ! And I'm hoping for more KakaSaku :)
    I hope I didn't offen you, my intention was to help you along with your story, even if just a little :)



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  • From ANON - DR. Jinxers on November 14, 2009
    Decent Story. Well thought out, and promising, with lots of room for shit Kishi is just too much of a pussy to throw in.

    Also, you're an asshole, because I JUST LOST.

    THANKS.
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  • From ANON - Emily on October 27, 2009
    You're going to keep writing right? I mean I think you've got some great ideas and really should keep working on it.
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