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Reviews for Whore

By : FireSnake
  • From ANON - moodysavage on February 06, 2011
    I liked this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From smint45 on January 29, 2011
    This is an absoloutly beautiful story!!! And it is way better than pretty women!!!! I totally love it!!! Thanks for posting!!!! See you again soon!!!!
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  • From darksexykurai on September 11, 2010
    omg this is soooooo good! i think that is the best story i have read with them to as a pairing! :) im so glad! i think this is one of my favs! it was so well written. You made me feel the naurto was feeling! i feel proud of him too! :) thanks for sharing! i feel so honored to read this!
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  • From NekoIzumi on November 08, 2009
    I read it all in one go... and I have to say, this one story is remarkable! It's well-planned, well-executed and of course, well-written on a pure lingual level. The fact that you've written this in First POV isnt anything negative at all, quite the opposite in my opinion. You give a very clear picture of what Naruto is thinking and its easy to follow his line of thought throughout the entire story. Of course, the fact that this is a ShinoNaru, only makes like it even more. Although they are slightly out of character, just a tad, I think you have one really stunnig piece of work right here.
    Excellent job!!

    On a side note, you seem to confuse 'your', as in someone else's, a lot with 'you're', as in 'you are'. Its not anything big really, bit it can be a bit of a distraction when you're so into the plot that even small typos can throw you off. If I'm not entirely mistaken, I think you wrote 'made' instead of 'mad' at the very end of the fic as well. Not saying I'm perfect at English, far from it, I have my share of errors, I just thought I'd point it out to you :)

    It was a pleasure to read this, a pure pleasure. Thank you so much for sharing!
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  • From arabuzumaki on August 03, 2009
    Thanks for the clarification ^_^. Wow Naru is amazing, it's great Shino came back.
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  • From butterflies1974 on August 02, 2009
    Wow, intense story and I love it. I so love seeing a Shino and Naruto story but I really like how real it is and how you made it more of how 'shit happens' but sometimes you find someone who knows you and loves you inspite. That makes a great story and I have to say that I had the same reaction to 'pretty woman' when I saw it again as I was older. :)
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  • From MasterofPie on August 01, 2009
    love it! I can not wait to find out what happens with Naruo and Shino ^__^
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  • From arabuzumaki on August 01, 2009
    hmmm i love how this story is told. what is wrong with kiba? lol. shino is really understanding. But why is naru not as free as he thought?
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on August 01, 2009
    Pretty interesting. I like it. Looking forward to your next update.
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