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Reviews for A Better Place

By : mrsprophet
  • From GudenMulle on May 11, 2010
    YOU are AWESOME! :D. Both Iruka and Kakashi are fantastic, and Genma made me laugh XD. Shouldn't Kakashi be taking the drug all the time, so that he'll respect his injury more? I can't believe that Genma is THAT scared of Iruka now, wuss :p. Really looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - ranni on May 10, 2010
    Love the fic, can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on March 16, 2010
    Great fic. Please continue it when ever you get a chance. I love it and cannot wait to see where our greatness takes us. Eagerly waiting and drooling for the next chapter. (Yes I am shamelessly begging.)
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  • From ANON - asialisek on February 15, 2010
    LOL~~!! this is a REALLY kute story! I love the dynamic you have between Kakashi and Iruka. Very genuine and not at all OC. i really hope you continue the story!!

    and I'd love an email about Updates: hayai.kitsune @ gmail.com
    the one thing that AFF really could use, and update notification system.

    Please write more!!!!! :D


    Joanna K.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2010
    I really enjoyed your story, especially the wasabi scene. I was wondering about your LiveJournal to see anything else you've written.
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  • From ANON - the-lady-smaell on December 10, 2009
    *laughs* much love hun! I'm really enjoying this story and am looking forward to an update. Keep up the good work MrsProphet
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  • From ANON - Alastriel on December 10, 2009
    See how crzy you can get with the following items.

    Iruka with:
    A tube of toothpaste
    Neon Pink Dye
    A tube of gorilla glue
    A box of toothpicks
    and A Head Of Broccoli

    Preferably all at the same time but individually is cool too. :D
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  • From Paradox13 on December 09, 2009
    I seem to have missed yet another update. I really don't know how, I have a link to it on profile and check it everyday. I haven't read the latest chapter yet, I would like to read it all again first. In the meantime, please email me when you update. w.willow70@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - F. Socks on November 22, 2009
    I hope you will continue with this story, as I have quite enjoyed reading it.
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  • From Paradox13 on November 13, 2009
    Have I told you how much I love your story? Oh, and I miss it too.

    Since your updates are not regular, have you given any thought to having an email update for readers? If you like the idea but haven't got the time then check out my profile, maybe I can help out one of my favorite authors.
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  • From KittyVonDitty on October 27, 2009
    I love it! You've written Kakashi brilliantly with his sort of emotional stuntedness and the bit with Iruka and the wasabi was pure genius.
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  • From ANON - Ryn on October 17, 2009
    Hey, just wanted to let you know that i'm really looking forward to your next chapter. I love the randomly breaking in thing, it's freaking adorable. I hope your able to keep the nice light interactions going.
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  • From NAnderson on October 10, 2009
    oh yummy :) lol. Well there are several typos and and conjunctive wording issues in each chapter. A beta may b needed. I know I needed 2 when I was writing lol. But the story line and plot laying is just stupendous :D I'm already dieing for the next chapter!!!!
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  • From Paradox13 on September 17, 2009
    Oh my god! After all may begging and constant checking, I actually missed an update. I am so ashamed.

    Any way, on to the chapter review.

    I liked the way the tables were turned on Iruka, now Kakashi has to watch him. It will certainly make things more interesting.

    Thank you for updating.
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  • From mizukiruhoh on September 16, 2009
    sweet! an update! this one of my favorite fics, good to see its still being written. ^_^
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