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Reviews for A small crack in perfection

By : eternalshiva
  • From ANON - Cydney on July 12, 2014
    when are you going to finish this? it is such a good story!
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  • From ANON - Darklordlight NL on April 02, 2014
    Hey there. Whatcha been up to?

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  • From ANON - Euri on May 18, 2013
    Omg this story is amazing. It just kept getting better and better with every chapter.

    I wish there'd be more but seeing as how this fic hasn't been updated in two years, it doesn't seem like it will be.

    I loved this story.
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  • From ANON - Silversal on February 09, 2013
    I love this story so much, I just hope someday you will update soon. It is really a greatly written story and I'll love to see what happen next here.
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  • From ANON - Silversal on July 11, 2012
    I don't lot but when I do it's for stories I just in love with. This sweet and funny, just start reading this story nonstop for two day straight and I should studying for an exam that coming soon so thank for the much needed mind break, it been a so long since I've read good fanfic that is written well and a nicely plan out plot. So for that I thank again and you have not forgotten about you're lovely story. Keep up the great work.
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  • From Darklordlight on November 29, 2011
    Magnifique! Brava! Encore! Tickle our fancy more, you amazing writer, you. This chapter was wonderful! It sated my hunger and now I wish to return to the main road, with this as a frequented rest stop. Oh, the magic those hands of yours create. I simply cannot get enough. Thank you for being born, and growing up to weave such intricate webs of words.
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  • From Darklordlight on November 28, 2011
    I only have two things to say after that long wait, "... THANK YOU!!!" I believe I speak for all of us here when I also say, "We missed you so much, you genius you."

    P.S. I'm writing this before I read the chapter because I just had to say how happy I am to have you post again. If only I could say the same for "Feral Dreams" author. They've been gone forever.
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  • From cynaga on November 14, 2011
    [ch 14] Lovely~!
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  • From Darklordlight on November 10, 2011
    ChelseaPlume is right. It just isn't nice to just quit on all your fans like that. I've been checking in constantly on this story for, like, thee years now. At least give us a hint that you're even alive, even if it's just an update saying something like, "The two had sex. The hacker was caught. And Naruto and Hinata lived happily ever after, the end." I mean, it would be a really sucky way to end such a beautiful and touching story. But at least it would BE an end.

    So... Please?
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  • From Darklordlight on November 10, 2011
    I'm sure this is probably getting quite annoying but I'd really appreciate it if you would update this story. It has been almost two years after all...
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  • From JamieGib on June 29, 2011
    It's so sad to see this beautifully written piece of work abandoned by its writer. This has got to be the best relationship story I've ever read between Naruto and Hinata. It's so well thought out and so carefully written that it practically writes its own love song. Plus, the secondary story involving the hacking is also damned interesting. I love seeing how you work all of the little references to the 'real' Naruto into the storyline, too. Please, please find it in your heart--and your word processor--to find you way back to finishing this lovely little gem. The sweet and wonderful story that is Naruto and Hinata deserve nothing less, and your faithful readers, new ones included, would love to see the conclusion to this very moving tale.
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  • From Darklordlight on March 22, 2011
    Please write more soon. I feel like a crack addict trying to quit cold turkey.
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  • From Aleya on December 09, 2010
    Hahahahahaha "You go bankrupt" Love it! Oh its been a while since I've seen this fic and I missed it so! Happy holiday hun!
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  • From roseredautumn on November 21, 2010
    AWWWW NO! you're killin' me with this! so close and no next chapter?!
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  • From roseredautumn on November 20, 2010
    DAMN IT.
    this story is so well written and sexy, and DAMNIT I WANTED THAT KISS TO HAPPEN! FUCK.
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