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Reviews for Something Has Got to Give

By : Prism0467
  • From kaiyousama on May 25, 2010
    Love it. Especially like the idea of Neji writing his name on Shika's ass... but I've always appreciated that particular kink. And the smexyness, the details... it's good :)
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  • From animeaddict666 on January 06, 2010
    “…he’d sit in his office, randomly shout obscenities and pull at his hair before going into the bathroom to beat off in a stall.” Okay, I about spit out my tea on my pretty new laptop thanks to that genius line.

    “…slow but sure descent into batshit insanity.” ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL MY LAPTOP. Evil woman.
    I adore your paragraph describing Zabuza. You are so damn witty. Makes me want to pinch your cheeks.

    “…nutritionally bankrupt meal and a five-finger salute to his solitude.” AMAZING turn of phrase. I am such a word whore and you are really making me a happy camper here. XD

    This sex was absolutely steamy. I loved Shikamaru’s insistence on slowing down. Very in character. The foreplay and the teasing so very realistic, and the dirty talk was sooooooo hot. Nice all around.

    The ending was perfect. I adored it. You did a great job. I’d love to see your Zabuza somewhere again. Had to be my favorite characterization I’ve ever read of him in an AU.

    My only crit is that the shift in POV sometimes confused me. We’d be in Shika’s POV and then Rock Lee would suddenly be thinking. Also, there’s something indescribably HOT about not knowing if the other male is attracted (e.g., we already know Shika and Neji are attracted to each other). I only notice this because it has been a focus of my own work lately, to stay in one POV for a whole scene, and BOY is it a pain. LOL

    Overall, amazing job. I’ll be sure to check out some of your other fics in my down time. Glad I got to read this!!

    EDIT: Fuck, sorry for the reposting. Damn site keeps cutting off my review…arg.

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  • From PrplGrl on July 09, 2009
    Ah, fun.
    That was a great read.
    Loved the sexual tension between Lee and Ten; fantastic.
    The way Neji and Shikamaru were characterized really worked; I don't mind some OOC, especially if an AU.
    Zabuza was awesome; Haku was just cute.
    All in all, very enjoyable.
    Now, off to read the sequel; yay!
    (and see if my suspicions were right on who Shika's ex is)

    Luv,
    Prpl Grl
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  • From sweetciel on June 02, 2009
    Love it love it! I love your characterizations of everyone. Neji is sexy as all hell!!! Uptight yet needy. Him being ready to have the car pulled over to the side of the road....Such a slutty Neji *loves you for writing him* ^_^
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  • From ShikaNejiLover on May 19, 2009
    I love their new roles, I squealed and giggled like a little schoolgirl, and I m not ashamed of it!

    Peace-Love-Yaoi
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  • From cynaga on May 17, 2009
    I like it!
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  • From arabuzumaki on May 16, 2009
    lol how did those two end up in jail lmao. lol love it.
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  • From jessysuki on May 15, 2009
    I loved it!can't wait!!There is not enough fics with this two ou there...I really like your stories, this would be no diferent.
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  • From CurtisZidaneZiraa on May 15, 2009
    Dude, you write the best stuff. Seriously. Keep going!
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  • From raiennnn on May 15, 2009
    I vote for Lee/Tenten to go on, but I don't want him to gloat too much like "I fucked her into submission... some sex with ME makes it all better..." I'm not saying you'd do that, but I've seen stories which turned out like this :/ Of course it's your story, you do what you want, but I like it, when girls surprise guys too, not only vice versa. Other than that, I like it very much - I love your ShikaNejiShika fics! Thank you for your hard work! :D
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  • From jordash00 on May 14, 2009
    You are killing me! I was just re-reading Costructive Possession for those Italic moments. I LIVE FOR THOSE MOMENTS! And here you go - a sharpie??? among others! I was peeing in my pants. This story's humor is reminiscent of the chapter in CP when Shika's parents had their first interaction with Hiashi and Neji. BRAVO!

    Once again, you have showed us your flexibility, creatiivity, genius, and versatility within your ability to write comedy, drama, heavy emotions, and of course passion within one story. I cannot wait for the ball to drop on the passion in this one. I know Neji's italic moments are going to be priceless.

    This is precisely why I will forever be a fan!

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  • From cynaga on May 14, 2009
    LLLLLLUUUUUUVVVVV IT~! More, more, more - please. And definitely we need Lee/Tenten too. THANKS!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2009
    I not only like this story but I love it! LeeTen sounds hot but NejiShika is just even hotter. Oh Neji is going to finally get some. I can't wait until you post the next chapter! I hope its soon. Like maybe tomorrow? Anyway, keep up the awesome work and I'm looking forward to your update for Inevitabile Resveglio as well. Ja Ne!
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  • From LolliPopLuvr2020 on May 14, 2009
    Hallelujah!!! I love it! Once again, you have amazed me with your prowess to spin an amazing story! Neji Tenten should definitely happen!! I want to see you try your hand at het... all I know is your yaoi prowess.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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