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Reviews for I Shall Not Want

By : redqueen
  • From ForgottenPrincess on August 21, 2009
    chapter 2
    What did kakashi do in that office???!!! Sounds scary, i'm happy that i was not on the otherside of that wrath. However, the part with November was really cute. I agree i got the feeling that he wants to marry iruka too.
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on August 20, 2009
    chapter 01
    OMG! Poor Iruka,I hope that he kicks ass even if he has been a teacher for so long. Did they have to do any tests I wonder? Dragon is a really cool name though. I hope he does good on the mission. Naruto is not even bi-curious??? *pout* oh well. I am hear for the iruka and kakashi anyways. Wonderful first chapter can't wait to read another one.
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  • From suzannecmc on August 18, 2009
    "As long as I have you, maybe not."

    this says it all for this couple.

    love the exchange between Philip and Iruka - delightful.
    excellent chapter, thank you.

    never worry how long it take to write quality and imagination!
    drip away girl, drip away;D
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  • From suzannecmc on July 22, 2009
    “You're more mature and have more experience than most new recruits,” Kakashi continues. “He'll want to harvest you as soon as he can;" -
    This is such a brilliant line.

    very realistic gore factor(actually was expecting it to be worse) nice balance.
    I love this Kakashi so much. He doesn't want Iruka to lose his humanity.
    You made me tear up! (and his time over the years with Iruka has seamed help Kakashi find some of his again)

    I finally read Hey Diddle Diddle's short you based the 'he wants' on
    I am so glad you ran with that story, because you breathed life in what was a good dark one-shot
    and made it incredible.

    Wonderful chapter - thank you.
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  • From suzannecmc on July 08, 2009
    yes...you are very silly o.o


    you have beautiful conflict with Iruka as Anbu.
    your evil, it must be killing him:)
    but you show him as I see him in the manga, a great ninja.
    he is striving to uphold his current position.

    this chapter has the flavor of political intrigue.
    look foward to what they find out on their recon.
    very nice, excellent:)

    thank you!

    PS - I miss Kakashi right along with him:)
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  • From suzannecmc on July 08, 2009
    your German's not too bad:)

    can you go "ya" instead of "yeah" I just tend to think American slang for yes.
    also trying to boost your reviews;P

    Have I told you I'm crazy for this story?
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  • From suzannecmc on July 08, 2009
    gah! did you post two in one shot?
    or did I miss something?

    no matter - you are one of the best writers out there and I don't gush like this often,
    believe me!
    your pace and prose are beautiful, stories original, putting just enough into your
    characters to make them distinctly different from other writing, yet retain enough
    of their original persona so they are recognizable.

    this story keeps me wondering in a very good way - it is a story you want to know what will
    happen next.
    Iruka's anxiety of wanting to do right by ANBU, his disapointment in not being just Iruka with Kakashi,
    and bringing in the extra "boys" for fun and tension and plot twists. kudos!

    I'm like a puupy piddling on the floor when I see you update - that's how excited I get - heh!!!:D
    thanks.
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  • From cynaga on June 15, 2009
    Wonderful characterizations, writing and a very fresh story. Soooooo good.
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  • From suzannecmc on June 14, 2009
    yeah, another chapter!

    bless you and yor twisted enjoyment:)
    very excited to see this, your laying nice ground-work
    for the story.
    your writing is wonderful as always.
    thank you!!!
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  • From cynaga on April 15, 2009
    Wow, just wow. Fantastic opening chapter full of tension and emotion wonderfully expressed. Great story idea! Thanks!!!
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  • From suzannecmc on April 12, 2009
    Sai could be having the time of his life, for all Iruka can tell,
    I love this line!

    me likee the Garra too;p pretty, pretty Garra.
    I like the natural progression of this story, never worry about detail!
    and you made Iruka an adrenaline junkie...excellent!

    shriveled black heart doing ok?
    Happy Holiday and thanks:D
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  • From suzannecmc on March 13, 2009
    excellent, wonderful flow.
    your progressing it at a smooth rate.
    I look forward to the next.
    than you:)
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  • From suzannecmc on March 01, 2009
    never be afraid to give information!
    that's the only way to make a story worthy.
    :)
    so many fluff stories out there. don't get me wrong,
    I love fluff, but it can get repetitive and boring so often.
    thanks for something interesting.
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  • From jordash00 on February 19, 2009
    I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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