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Reviews for What He Wants

By : redqueen
  • From ANON - feklar on November 11, 2013
    This is a really amazing story. The characters feel real, authentic, and mature. Kakashi felt truly mad and desperate, but still empathetic. Iruka seemed to really grow in this fic. I liked that the ending was happy, but also dark. Thank you also for making Shiko a realistic woman instead of a shrieking harpy. :-)
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  • From ANON - Daga on November 08, 2013
    Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was great. I'm surprise how little viewers you had. Your story has what I enjoy the most: original universe, believable plot and characters. I love your crazy, insolent Kakashi and kind, yet hot-tempered Iruka. They fit to "real" ones perfectly. You managed to keep the story interesting even without much action and love scenes. It would be better if the story had a little more sex but I'm not complaining ;)
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  • From ANON - SapphireGrey on September 06, 2012
    This is a genuinely superb piece of work. Your characters are plausible and distinctive, the plotting is tight and well-paced, and the narrative is compelling. It's been a real (not to say rare) pleasure to stumble across something this good.
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on January 23, 2011
    Just re-read this! And wanted to tell you again that this is one of my very favorite kakairu stories! EVER!
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  • From serpensortia on April 23, 2010
    I loved this story it kept me up until 1:30 am and i work... silly me but i loved it. And i loved the brain detergent line. much like my much used and abused mental emergency kit i keep handy. Steel wool and Whiskey never serves better for a brain scrub. But off to bed with me.

    serpen
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  • From Irana on February 19, 2010
    Wow. That was one hell of a ride. I spent more of the fic thinking 'Oh gods, this isn't going to work out' and then when Iruka left and Kakashi didn't fight it and started getting sick I thought 'Please tell me he didn't do what i think he did'. Only I was right, but it still worked out. I'm a happy ending girl, and I have to say that not only was the story beautifully written, the ending made all the angst totally worth it.
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  • From suzannecmc on February 28, 2009
    alright, so I basically read this in one sitting:)

    it has to be one of the most original kakarus I have ever read.
    well thought, amazingly plotted, and beautifully written.
    I was intrigued, shocked, heartbroken (hell you made me cry!)
    and hopeful.
    I cannot remember the last time I was so wrapped up in a piece
    of fanfiction.
    wonderful, just wonderful.
    thank you.

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  • From sris on February 20, 2009
    It was an incredible story with substance! You didn't let Kakashi get off too easy and you made me feel sorry for them both in turns. All the friends around the two shinobi were nicely written as well, and loved the scene where Gai made Kakashi cry. Also, the whole team trying to fix Iruka was credible and true to their characters. Maybe the best part of the whole fic was the interaction between Iruka and Kakashi, which was really natural and felt authentic. I also liked the way you wrote Kakashi's scarred mind, the twisted and frightfully sound logic behind his reasoning. I managed to forget it was an IruKaka fic and was a little thrown off in the last chapter—I have problems picturing Iruka as seme—but recovered quite fast for the sex scene was so hot. I think I'll add you into my recommended reading. Oh, and Kakashi's hide out was brilliant with all the ingenious, little details (food, message, origami), you used them all beautifully.
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  • From sris on February 20, 2009
    Just finished the chapter four. You've written very nicely the conflict Iruka must've been having; knowing his memories weren't real but still feeling the love and remembering his life with Kakashi. This is truly emotional story. It's refreshing to read something written in present tense, especially, when it's done this well.
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  • From flameofthenight on February 20, 2009
    Fabulous. A story with plot AND sex...and a good plot to boot. You make it seem very plausable. Again I say brava. Now...onto the sequel.
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  • From flameofthenight on February 20, 2009
    Ive never seen a plot like this before! Brava I love it.. However I wish you wouldnt right in present tense.
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  • From MsSmokey on February 19, 2009
    I don't know why more people haven't caught on to your story yet, but i hope they do, because it should be known! Well done for creating a fanfiction that actually had a really interesting story which made complete sense. This is what i search for when reading a story!
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  • From sris on February 14, 2009
    I've only read the first chapter, but will read the rest when I have the time. The story seems very interesting, though I think I know what the main twist will be... Still, I'm very intrigued. You've got a nice angle and, I believe, a thrilling plot planned for my favourite pairing. Not to mention your writing, which is a pleasure to read even by itself. I look forward to read the rest, and will review again as I do. Thanks for sharing What He Wants.
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