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Reviews for Jingle Bells (Not a Christmas story!!)

By : ShinobiGoneWild
  • From coldxfire on September 08, 2009
    Oh wow, awesome :D

    You write very well. This story is a lot more visceral than most, as well, which made me wonder whether you might be a medical student or something... My one qualm is with the use of "blood-saturated cock" as it jars a little- the word "blood" feels incongruous and draws too much attention to itself in the context. But other than that I really enjoyed this :)
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  • From Blackwidina on April 03, 2009
    @_@ Whoa . . . I think I just drooled all over my desk. I LOVE this fic. I think it ranks right up there in the top ten. Your writing is wonderfully descriptive, you know how to use spellcheck, and your characterizations were *excellent*.

    You. Are. Awesome. I fangirl all over you.

    Will there ever be a sequel?

    Dina
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  • From nekluvshp on January 23, 2009
    OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!! That was the hottest thing I have ever, EVER read. And I don't even really like this pairing. But this has definitely converted me!!!
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  • From ANON - Alice on January 06, 2009
    holy jesus almighty, this might be the hottest kakashixsasuke fic i've ever read to day. XD
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  • From ANON - anonle on December 28, 2008
    That was one of the hottest lemons that I have EVER read. You should enter this piece in a contest, it would have a good shot at winning. Excellent job!
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  • From ANON - Ella on December 25, 2008
    Hooooly shit, that was hot. Wow. Sorry, I don't have any more constructive criticism to give.

    ...Jeeesus
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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on December 25, 2008
    *cheers*

    This, it is good stuff! :D Love Sasuke's personality here - so determined and focused, and a little bit bratty, though he doesn't mean to be XD

    And the smut? Good? YES.

    Also, I love the way you ended it... I chortle at the thought that they each have blackmail material on the other.

    If I knew how to do the little heart thing, I'd do it - right - here!

    Merry Christmas!
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  • From ANON - xxxx on December 23, 2008
    Super hot! Great dialogue and nom nom on the smut.
    I wish this wasn't a one shot D:
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  • From on December 23, 2008
    That was so fucking hot. Kakashi feeling his cock through Sasuke's body...um. WOW. I loved it. Very raunchy. I think this is one of my favourite smut stories ever!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2008
    Okay. Wow. This was amazing. Just flat out amazing. I was on the edge of my seat totally drawn into it and grinning like an idiot throughout. I have to say that the Itachi/Sasuke was almost as hot (as short a part as it was) as the overall Kakashi/Sasuke...

    Maybe in the future you could dish us out a little Ita/Sasu? *winknudge*

    LOVED it. I'm going to be sure to keep an eye on your future works!

    -Mizu.B
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