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Reviews for The First Time

By : ShinobiGoneWild
  • From ANON - HyperBlueKitten on February 20, 2009
    Damn. This... I was so into this. Deadly, twisted, and errotic.... Great job! ^~^
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  • From arabuzumaki on December 11, 2008
    this was nice. lol at gemna just showing up lol he has great timing lol ^_^
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  • From Sylvir on December 04, 2008
    It was violent and disturbing and wonderful.
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  • From ANON - xxxx on December 04, 2008
    I loved this so much. I wish there were more stories where Kakashi actually felt bad for what he was doing and both of them being crazy and such
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  • From LindyStar on December 03, 2008
    Ohhh~ very different (in a good way). Really made me feel for them because the POV was so believable, and the actions and thoughts for the characters.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on December 02, 2008
    Dark but strangely appropriate. Excellent job on expressing just how easy it is to fall into that pattern of thought and obsession once you start. Thank you for writing this, it is a wonderful piece of work.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on December 02, 2008
    That was really good. And kinda creepy. But good.
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