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Reviews for Retrieval

By : Vesca
  • From ANON - deviltiger on July 17, 2009
    Where do you come up with all your wonderful ideas? I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - melissa on March 27, 2009
    Awesome story, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From Travellyr on January 24, 2009
    DRIVE-BY AFFECTION!!!!1!11!1one
    *GLOMP*
    Rereading, because I like this, and it was easier to find here than LJ, and perhaps I'll send a random review attack through the LJ messaging system too. Maybe! :D

    XD oh my god, Jiraiya in the corner and his RESEARCH. The Icha Icha version of Sleeping Beauty is coming right up, I can SMELL it.
    Oh well, Jiraiya can't possibly do it any hankier than Anne Rice did. X3

    Drama, yay, but intelligent commentary about the intelligent parts of this story just isn't going to happen at two-thirty in the morning. SO! HOORAY, SOLICITING SEX AMONG THE NURSES.

    SO, HELLO I LOVE YOU, and I like this story much. Life happens, but don't forget, okay? Or the water spirit, or Not The Mommy, or the space opera. :D
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  • From Travellyr on December 03, 2008
    *cackles*
    I love your brains.
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  • From ANON - aoh on December 03, 2008
    hahahaha! i can so see kakashi's expression at tsunade's last words! LOL. please write another chapter =)
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  • From ANON - Anise on December 03, 2008
    Wouldn't it be nice if all medical problems could be solved with a solution like that ;) Very informative chapter about what everyone had been put through and I liked the idea of Sasuke having to teach at the academy as punishment, it would serve him right :) I'm a little concerned about what memories Iruka may be missing, let's hope they may just be little bits and pieces and not entire people and places, definitely looking forward to the next chapter it's going to be interesting :)
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  • From RyuEarth on December 03, 2008
    Is it too much to ask to have Kakashi do it? ^^;
    Thanks for the update! I loved it! XD
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  • From Juniperbreezie on November 28, 2008
    I like it. It's a great start.
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  • From polaris on November 27, 2008
    I love it! PLEASE CONTINUE!
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  • From ANON - Anise on November 26, 2008
    Well that was definitely a different start to sex between these two and as for shortcomings, there really wasn't any that I could see I thought it was fabulous! :) I'm hoping there will be some more I would love to see what happens once they get home, poor Kakashi having to be in Sound for three years he definitely deserves to have a little vacation and relax with a certain cute chuunin ;)
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  • From mizukiruhoh on November 26, 2008
    a fascinating beginnning. :D
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  • From RyuEarth on November 25, 2008
    My review is going to sound so noobish, but I completely love this story! XD
    I totally love this, and I like how Iruka and Kakashi interacted with eachother! =)
    My brain has gone numb ^^;
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  • From Travellyr on November 25, 2008
    ::huge, cat-and-canary grin::
    Thank you for putting this up after I had a long, rough day trying to make a final project behave. I intend to leave a better review than "zomg you saved my BRAIN," like how I liked this, and why, and why it's lovely, because it is, but frankly, it's three in the morning and I have to work today, but now I'm not stressed and depressed!
    Now I'm giggling and happy and sly, and I like this way much better. ^^ I always like your fic, dear. Thanks.
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