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Reviews for A Fine Line Between Us

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  • From BlazinAtsuma on June 09, 2010
    hey Great chapter but I hope u can start with a new chapter soon. I like the dream and hope to hear from you I wonder what is going to happen in your other story A Fine Fine Line... Hope you get a new update for both stories up soon thanx and love your stories
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  • From RichardH on June 12, 2009
    awww, cutest chapter ever I bet this story is going to get deeper at some point
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  • From Arkinine on April 26, 2009
    I am really enjoying Sakura's point of view. By slitting A Fine Fine Line and A Fine Line Between Us into two perspectives, you are showing what they are both thinking, without making it really confusing or long. I love this story, it is very romantic and touching, in an awkward sort of way. I would love to see what comes next from both points of view.
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  • From gilbertmaxter on January 31, 2009
    Great chapters i gotta say your a very good writer. i hope to read the next chapter soon, also both of your stories are very great i am not sure if i reviewed the other story but i will say they are both great :)


    word of advice: keep doing what your doing!
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  • From MPlantz on January 18, 2009
    hey even though this is almost word for word the diolog from shippuden 54. it's like im watching the episode all over again. i like how you caught on to ino fallig head over heals for sai. i have been trying to find a fic with this pairing but no luck. if at all posible would you be interested in a chalenge or even a colaboration. i have really been into the whole non-cannon pairings and right now i have really been bent on trying to find new good stories of naruto/sakura. but if you are interseted hit me up my e-mail is on my profile.

    MPlantz
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  • From gilbertmaxter on January 09, 2009
    Nice chapter i must say :)

    i can't wait to read the next one, and i like the new chapter to your other stories.

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  • From goodchaos on January 06, 2009
    I'm not so good at reviewing, but I just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying this fic... More Please!! :)
    I can't wait to see Sakura nursing Naruto! ^_^
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  • From RichardH on November 24, 2008
    interesting and very profound chapters in both stories, great job
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  • From RichardH on November 13, 2008
    it didn't freak me out, hell, my nightmares make that one seem like a sweet dream. I was just saying that disclaimers like that should be at the top of the page, that's all.
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  • From isame on November 13, 2008
    hmm, not bad. i like it. but could you do more naruto sakura fluff? i love the couple! thanks!
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  • From RichardH on November 04, 2008
    ...*picks up Icha Icha and holds it in front of his face* you know, that special note would have been a lot better if you place it before the story /most kakashi like voice ever/
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on November 02, 2008
    Hey I like the story but in the first 2 chapters it was hard to know what was said and thought... If you could make more understandable on those two parts it would really help in understanding their thoughts better.. Hope you write more updates for these two great stories...
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  • From RichardH on November 01, 2008
    I can't wait to see this caught up to a fine fine line, I'm on pins and needles waiting for it (and again, I'm not a fan of Naruto/sakura)
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  • From RichardH on October 30, 2008
    I'll say the last 2 chapters were decent, not really good, just decent. I say you have a lot more room to improve, but I know what is coming, so I know if I say something negative about it, you'll strive to do more. I can't wait to see how far Sakura's love and care for Naruto will go, keep it up.
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  • From RichardH on October 21, 2008
    you damn well better, I personally like Naruto and Hinata as a couple more, but you have a nice flavor on this. you also really don't need to explain inner sakura to anyone, I think it's clear she has a rather split personality, even despite training to get over it with Tsunade. good job on the second chapter, can't wait for the next one for 'A fine fine line'!
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