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Reviews for Dumplings, Fake Trees, and the Masked Man

By : RichardH
  • From Coldstone on October 19, 2008
    You did quite well.

    Not only with Kurenai, Anko and Kakashi, but with Shikamaru and Temari also.

    I'd say this was perfect.
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  • From ShyTanith on October 17, 2008
    Interesting. Personally I can't imagine Shika calling Kurenai nee-chan (I would think ba-chan [aunty]) but this is your story not mine. The 3some was pretty good for the most part, be careful not to leave one person out as that is a common mistake. One of the best moresomes I have seen on this site is called 'Bitch Nights' by 'Blackwidina' it is based on Team Kakashi which is not to everyone's liking but the lemons are excellently written and worth checking out for inspiration.
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  • From rxtechgirl on October 16, 2008
    Nice! You always write the best smut. LOL :P

    ~Ani
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