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Reviews for Stimulus, Response

By : antilogicgirl
  • From ANON - Anonymous on October 11, 2008
    What a great story! I really loved this pairing! You really were able to get Karin's personality and make me not only think of her as awesome but root for her. She definitely reminds me of Temari and how she might not actually be that far-fetched of a character to hook up with Shikamaru considering (well I suspect) that he likes women like these (they do resemble his mom after all). The fact that I now can see Karin as a possible character for Shikamaru is due solely to your characterization of her! Great job! Shikamaru was great in this story, very hot. I also loved the reference to Love in the time of Cholera and that made me laugh.
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  • From ANON - Hentai_Wolf on October 04, 2008
    I am shocked and amazed. You are displaying skill and talent that is very seldom seen on this site, or any other amateur site. I was impressed by lots of the small things in your story Radio Tokyo, such as the Boondock Saints reference when describing turettes, and the slight, but believable personalities that you gave to Naruto, for example, and his love of coffee. You managed to make the charaters Yours, while still keeping the core of them true to what has been displayed in the manga and the anime - well, except for Juugo, but you apologized for that.
    There were a few things that i felt could have been done slightly better, but that is purely an opinion of a guy who enjoys faaaar too much character development. For instance, you introduced Ino and Kiba, and I don't know if this was intentional, but to me Kiba seemed to be incredibly laid back and relaxed: you didn't give him much of a reaction when Ino asked Naruto out. Also, I know that you worked really hard on the scene with Juugo and Sakura and Sasuke in the bathroom - but Sasuke's reaction seemed a little unbelievable - I would have envisioned him as calling for backup with one hand while beating the guy black and blue with the other; it would be a reflexive twitch, almost, to have him call for the NarutoCavalry, as he is the one who has always been around, and dragged him back to this world, as you made it seem. Granted, that might not have taken the story in the direction that you wanted it to go, but again - this is just a possible flaw that I noticed.
    Again, you have done an amazingly excellent job, and I am looking forward to reading more of your works. If you need someone to bounce ideas off of, please feel free to make use of my e-mail address.
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  • From ANON - zeroharm on September 25, 2008
    wow... have to say that isn't a pairing you see everyday. Can't fault you on composition or imagery though; This is definitely an exceptional waff fic that has some great character tension.
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  • From ExposedDesires on September 24, 2008
    Was simply wonderful, and even though it's a completely crack pairing it worked beautifully.
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