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Reviews for Final Straw

By : Akureitsumetai
  • From ANON - John on June 04, 2010
    Oh wow! You need to continue^^ This story was a bit confusing by all of the skips and everything... Kind of like a seizure... Anyways I really enjoy it... Write more!!!!
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  • From DetoxAngel on August 23, 2009
    NOOOOOO!!!!! Where's the rest of this wonderful story?! We need more! I loved it, and I can't wait for there to be more NaruHina. Also, although Hinata is OOC, it isn't in a bad way at all. I like the way you portray her, and I love Naruto. And one slight thing that bothers me, it's Konoha no Sato, not Saito. Sorry, I know that's annoying, but so goes the process of being a great author. Every great author needs constructive critcism. Anyway, please continue soon, I can't wait to read more.

    Ja'ne!
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  • From zephyrdark on April 30, 2009
    awesome story tho i hope the naruhina develops a bit more quickly. anywho i kno u said it wont b up any time soon but i do look forward to the next chapter
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  • From serenagold on April 18, 2009
    lol. What a delightfully spiteful greeting!
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  • From ANON - Kyuubi123 on April 18, 2009
    Nice chapter! I can't wait to see what Hinata does to Sasuke, as well as see the develpment between Naruto and Hinata.
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  • From Angelus03618 on February 16, 2009
    this is such a great story... I totally can't wait for an update
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  • From Church on January 27, 2009
    Ohhh......YOU BASTARD!!! I WANT MOAR!! Fuck lol. so Naruto is a badass has alot of spine and can get some fucking revenge in this. HELL YEAH! Ill be back to check for updates and dude this story is epic keep it going man you got it good.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2009
    nice chapter
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  • From ANON - JoshB on December 21, 2008
    Hey that was a really weird fight sequence. It was kinda hard to understand who was doing what. And I guess Naruto is going back to Konoha and Hinata was forced to forget about him for what reason and now what is going to happen when he returns home. And he changed his appearance to go against Akatsuki.
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  • From ANON - Terri on December 19, 2008
    Hey I love this fic and have been visiting this sight regularly to see of you've updated. I can't wait to see how it develops but I guess I'll have to! I love that Naruto seems really dark and I'm looking forward to see where he and Hinata go on from all this.

    Please update soon!!
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  • From serenagold on December 19, 2008
    A very cool fic. I like how Naruto assumed the identity of Aoikaze. Makes for a cool opponent to the Akatsuki.

    Also, I was wondering, how old is everyone in this fic? I'm assuming they're not the eleven or twelve they were in the canon during the battle in Wave country. Especially if Kakashi is able to confuse Naruto for Minato. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ShouraiChan on November 30, 2008
    Okay, it's official--I cannot STAND you or this story.

    One, I can't stand you, as the author for STOPPING AT DAMN CLIFFIES!!!! XD and Two, I can't stand this story simply because...well, it's TOO GOOD TO END AT DAMN CLIFFIES, rotflmao.

    Bet you thought this was a flame, didn't you? NEVER!!!!!!!!!! Okies, seriously though, looking forward to the next chapters!!!! Can't wait!!!!! Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!! And please don't be mad at me for almost giving you a heart-attack! Much loves!!!
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  • From ANON - Josh on October 13, 2008
    Hey the chapter was a bit unneving but it seems like ur heading into a very dark passage for Naruto
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  • From Perpetual159 on October 03, 2008
    this Chapter is not bad or anything. I don't think it is a filler more than it is a teaser. Check out my profile. My Email should be there. If not, I'm at gmail.com. Same name
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  • From zephyrdark on October 03, 2008
    nice chapter, it's getting good, can't wait for the update.
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