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Reviews for Turn about is fair play

By : VFSNAKE
  • From ps2boy on April 16, 2015
    good job like it and when will do the melfrcnt kitsin??
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  • From S3vEn on April 20, 2013
    Really funny / good :D
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  • From elementalmaster16 on June 03, 2011
    i'd like to read about the others as well :)
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  • From dan79 on February 21, 2010
    you have to admit this is a non violent way of solving the fangirl problem
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  • From cbadgr123 on December 17, 2009
    sweet but too bad you didn't have more details of what he did to the other women.

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  • From BigBalls on May 18, 2009
    you should continue this, branch it off to different girls, tell anko's, hana's, anyone's version of this. it would be pretty good.
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  • From ANON - Leaf Ranger on March 22, 2009
    Heh heh heh. Glad I finally found this place. Nice man. I also looked over the other one, the one with the force. Nice. But the one I'm really waiting for is the last chapter of Establishing Dominance. Can you PM me when you update here?
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  • From Yamizenchou on October 24, 2008
    Please write more chapters for this showcasing other women. And I'm not entirely sure if they had cameras. Though since it was showed before that they have security cameras and televisions, they most likely had photo cameras.
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  • From 1upmushroom on September 22, 2008
    Right, cameras.. Next you'll be saying they have cell phones in their time period. How about TV sets? Maybe a few cars?
    Sigh, don't take this as a flame, I'm just cranky with boredom.
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  • From Pinkney on September 22, 2008
    Damn... just damn. I loved it! I hope you write more of Naruto dominating girls stories.
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  • From DragonMan220 on September 22, 2008
    Very nice, I can just see Hinata cornering Ino later and pulling out a whip to punish her though.
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  • From ShouraiChan on September 22, 2008
    LOVED IT. Ino is not one of my favorite characters at times, so I really enjoyed this! Go Naruto! (For that matter, go Tsunade!) I liked it!

    ~Sho-Chan~
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  • From GhostwriterMO on September 21, 2008
    Please tell what happened with Anko, Sakura and Hana PLEASE!!! I gotta know what you put Sakura through (with Hinata involved) and hopefully alot of it! This story was awesome please do more and hopefully you can do a story with Naruto/Tsunade and Hinata? (gets on hands and knees) PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on September 21, 2008
    Awesome story.
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  • From serenagold on September 21, 2008
    haha! Although I was half expecting Hinata to come home and get involved, this was delightfully humorous. ^^ Keep up the good work.
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