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Reviews for Establishing Dominance

By : VFSNAKE
  • From Stres on April 23, 2018

    A nice read  but was disapointed about naruto punishment on kiba , i mean you made him an alpha and even named him that in story but he dident do shit when kiba tried frist time and second time the punishments seems realy pathetic(an alpha will kill a lil runt geting on his teritory not to say try his luck on his woman) . All in all loved the story hope i can read some other storyes from you as good as this .


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  • From ANON - Anon on January 10, 2014
    The poor doctor hit by tsunade

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  • From ANON - SakuSaku on December 04, 2012
    I was going to stop reading when the Sakura-chan hate started. I like her and I wasn't happy she was being bashed. Lucky for me I didn't stop because you gave us a good twist on her! For those who stopped reading this: You missed out.
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  • From ANON - lylenidus10 on September 15, 2011
    Awesome story. I love the way you write and enjoy practically all of your work. Call me a perv if you want to, but I really enjoy a good harem story and you did one that was great.
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  • From ANON - angel on August 15, 2011
    I loved this fic!!!! I loved the plot line and the lemon which is rare for me I either like one or the other so -gives you 49 trunks full of cookies-
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  • From ANON - elementalmaster16 on May 24, 2011
    !!!!!! SUCH AN AWESOME STORY !!!!!!
    please continue making these amazing adult stories.
    don't really see the M/M though (very happy about it as well (: )
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  • From MorbidFantasy on March 23, 2011
    Lol this fic read like a doujin. A little repetitive but then again so is the motion I make when fapping it, which I did to the fic.

    The women gave in a lil' easy, but that's just since I'm into hardcore rape. This was a fun read. Kudos lol
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on November 07, 2009
    Awesome chapter.
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  • From DarthValgaav on November 06, 2009
    needed more sex
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  • From gogo1221 on July 09, 2009
    great story cn wait for more chapters
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2009
    ok so far i see only on bad thing no anal i know for sure that i'd do them girls in the ass especially anko and sakura hell with sakura i'd have done her ass first as a little payback
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  • From Pinkney on April 21, 2009
    Check out my story, Naruto: Champion of the Elder Gods over at Fanfiction.net It's been updated recently.
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  • From Pinkney on April 18, 2009
    Chapter 7 of Naruto and Hinata's harem is up right now.

    Speaking of updates, when are you gonna update?
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  • From ANON - ?????? on March 22, 2009
    Why isnt this on fanficton (to answer just put on FF profile or beginning of next new chapter)
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  • From Shawndra on March 09, 2009
    hot...hot,hot,hot...ah shit it burns. That was awsome in all aspects. I can't wait for the next chapter. I was a little eh about putting Sakura in the story, but I have to say you made it work(kudos). PLEASE POST ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON I NEED MY FIX MAN! hahaha...mini freakout.

    With much respect,



    The Prince of Madness
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