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Reviews for Kindred

By : Prism0467
  • From Demoninmysoul on December 13, 2011
    Great fic! I just loved it!

    Would they be able to work normally, with the sexual tension between them? Or the others for that matter... If they're like in the restaurant, then I'd like to see a sequel too with the minefield!!!

    Thanks!
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  • From leika7777 on November 11, 2010
    OMG, I looooooove your fic! I read Kindred over and over, You are so talented!!
    Gahhh I totally fall in love with ShikaNejiShika!!!!
    :Dariuchka: recommended me this fic from DA, Thank you for sharing yout fantastic fiction!!
    This fic inspired me so hardly, Ahhhh I think I love you...
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  • From wyntermist70 on April 28, 2010
    Kawaii Loved it ssssssssssssssssssoooo much love your writing style
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  • From randomness on April 24, 2010
    Just read chpt 2 the backstory, which was very nicely written. Quick clean cut information on both characters I like it. I love the way you describe Neji's beauty without it sounding or coming off feminine, I can't stand that. So applause to you for that. I can't wait to read more later.
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  • From randomness on April 23, 2010
    OMG I love this first chapter, and I hope the rest of the story is just as good. The idea of Neji and Shika being law partners is so new and very nice. Shika in reading glasses too cute. I love how he loves Neji's voice, it is freaking delicious to hear. The atmosphere the mood you set for the story was great it caught me at the first paragraph. Very nice so far I like it alot, except the phrase "Gods on a ship" I think it was, kinda weird and different maybe because I've never heard it used before but thats just a small peeve.
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  • From Irana on February 25, 2010
    Okay... had to stop for a minute, have a cigarette and a drink. Damn woman! Whew! That was one intense ride! Pun intended. I'm going to have another cigarette, hope the cold freezes my brain back into operation capacity, then read the rest of this. Sheesh.
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  • From PrplGrl on August 02, 2009
    Aww!
    So sweet and...halfway hot!
    That last scene could have used a little less talking and a bit more smut, but hey it works! ;)
    I mean, come on!
    Shikamaru and Neji in the same bathtub at the same time?!
    I was waiting for some yumminess with that tub since Shikamaru laid eyes on it a few chapters back!
    Alas, I'll just have to cope. *sniff*

    Anyway, excellent job!
    I loved the way the characters were portrayed and just the general plot was unique.
    Very well done!
    Until next time!!

    Luv,
    Prpl Grl
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  • From PrplGrl on August 01, 2009
    (Chapter 4)
    ...I can't believe that.
    Another reference to Out In the Cold?
    Wow...is it that popular?
    I had a feeling I'd have to stop and review this chapter before continuing on.
    Now I know why.
    Once I came across that line though, "Neji was pillow-humping happy¹ at hearing this..."
    I laughed very hard. XD
    I tend to geek out at stuff like this.
    That is actually kind of cool, if I think about it.

    I seem to remember reading the first chapter, but not any of the others.
    Not that it was bad(I don't usually review all the time -_-), I think I read it when this story was first published.
    Guess I missed the rest. :P
    Anyway, it's quite interesting and I will continue on, wondering what will become of the investigators.
    ...This is probably going to be really hot...
    XD

    Luv,
    Prpl Grl
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  • From sweetciel on September 02, 2008
    Great great great great fic!! It was excellent! I started reading it some time ago..but it didn't grab me so i stopped. I decided to come back to it since i couldn't remember what turned me off about it. I must've been out of it that day because i could find no wrong with it now. The role reversal was just brilliant. I so pegged Neji for the bottom, especially after learning about Shika's 12 inches of love...wow...There has got to be a sidefic/oneshot about Neji's first time bottoming for Shikamaru. Love you ^_^
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  • From Twiggies on August 29, 2008
    Hehe, poor Shika!
    He must be very sore. But it was worth it! :D
    Awh, they are really adorable.
    Happily ever after? I hope so! :D They should.

    Really good fic!
    I don't usually read stories with Neji seme, but this was definitely good!
    Now, I'm off to read that side fic! :DD
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  • From myperversities on August 28, 2008
    OH MY FUCKIN" GOD!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT HOT HOT!!! This was amazingly well done, bravo. Keep them comming and you'll have my support!! lol ;). But just so you know....12 inches is WAY TOO BIG!! The avarage guy is like 5-7 and one of the biggest guys known of is 9 something and he's a porn star because of it!! XD Just thought you might want to make that small correction maybe to Neji 7 and wide and Shika 9 and long dunno. But anywho keep up the amazing work!!
    Luv you!!

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  • From Shaylilin on August 28, 2008
    That was a sweet ending.
    *le sigh*
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  • From Twiggies on August 27, 2008
    Really good chapter!
    Hehe, take that Kiba! He was really rude.
    You shouldn't say things like that to Neji. Especially if they include Shikamaru. xDD

    Heh, it's good that Shikamaru stayed in bed.
    He can actually sleep now, without medicine.

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From Shaylilin on August 26, 2008
    Stupid Kiba. *growls*
    I think that Neji put him in his place though, at least for now.
    *sigh* some people are such jerks.
    And what a rebel, going without a tie? I'm thinking hell has frozen over. j/k :).
    *stares at the screen waiting for an update*
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  • From Twiggies on August 26, 2008
    Ooh, so hot!
    Hehe, Neji's such a teaser. ;D
    But he couldn't resist in the end. xD
    And Shika fell straíght to sleep. xD Well, he more like passed out! :D
    Lovely.

    Really hit and awesome chapter once again!
    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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