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Reviews for So I'll See you there then?

By : chibizoe
  • From TaiKaiten on November 28, 2008
    Haha! you might want to clear up the last sentence or two in the 5th chapter...
    talking about tea... then talking about swirling water with a toe...
    made it seem (to me) that he was swirling his tea water with a toe...
    which, of course, made my 3-am sleep=clogged mind conjure up kakashi with a foot fetish... (yeah, my mind is BEYOND sleep-fucked...)

    eheh ^.^" other than that!! lol
    the story rocks, a few off-beat phrases that didn't make sense, and some grammatical errors...
    but yeah, awesome!!

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  • From BlackShadowChild on September 04, 2008
    Wow! More?
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  • From KansouAme on July 03, 2008
    This was a really nice piece. I would have loved to hear the story about how Iruka became a Sexual Dysfunctional Therapist. Bet that would be a good one. I thought it was first just his excuse to get in Kakashi's pants *grin*

    Nicely done.. ^_^
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