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Reviews for Of Birds Who Fly Free

By : ArtemisSensei
  • From ANON - Davey Lockhart on July 11, 2008
    I wouldn't mind the village elders being dead. :D

    Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Davey Lockhart on July 11, 2008
    Lmao, that would be freakin' hilarious if that had really happened in the manga. I would have fallen out of my chair laughing.
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  • From ANON - Rose on July 10, 2008
    I am so glad you updated! I like how cocky Sasuke is but I think he would be a bit more nervous having only had sex one time and now having it with Naruto. He would never show it, but I think he'd be a bit more... I'm not sure how to put it but off is the only way I can describe it. All in all I love it. Another good lemon, and who doesn't love handcuffs. In reaction to your authors comment I have to say I disagree. Having been an orphan his entire life, I think having someone say "I Love You" and mean it would be a great deal to Naruto. Sasuke not so much, but we're all allowed our different opinions. With your characterizations I think the possession works better. Looking forward to more updates, keep up the awesome work.
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  • From narutovixen383 on July 10, 2008
    Wow, I honestly really like how the story has been going and I think that your latest lemon was amazing! I had my own shivers when Sasuke told Naruto that he wanted to fuck him!!! Took Naruto long enough to realize that only Sasuke would be able to please him in the end! It just wouldn't have worked out any other way! And I love how Sasuke kicked that chick out of their apartment! They both definitely showed a jealous side, but I think it's time for Naruto to bring forth his jealousy!!! I love this story! Can't wait for the next update!!
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  • From Avonne on July 10, 2008
    Oh! This had to be one of the best Lemon scenes I've ever read. I love how Sasuke's inexperienced but he's still so cocky, because that's just the way that Sasuke is. And I really like the idea of Naruto being a good kisser, making Sasuke moan! This chapter was so good!! I love the way you write them. :D
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on July 09, 2008
    yes naruto, they do. can't wait to see what sas has in store for naruto!! *excited*
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  • From Soulcaster on July 09, 2008
    damn better and better
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  • From KiaraNxiar on July 05, 2008
    Very well written. Funny, interesting, tasteful smut and enjoyable to read. I totally loved ch. 11. Especially, Kakashi's conversation with Sasuke. It somehow described Sasuke in a very dark compassionate way and showed him as the submissive yet more mature person than Naruto.
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  • From Raholea on July 04, 2008
    *chuckles* i love the image of itachi and naruto's father sharing sake and playing dice. i mean, it sounds just so... surreal, maybe? though it's amusing. they're prolly betting on who's going to get their head in gear first. oh, and i can't wait to see wht sasuke does to drive the point home. i'll be watching for updates!!
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  • From Avonne on July 04, 2008
    I really like this story, it's so in character to have Naruto so clueless and Sasuke so stubborn as to who they're in love with. You're writing this very realistically, I can't wait for the next chap!
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  • From ladywolfTerri on July 04, 2008
    This should have so many more reviews!! It's a fabulous fic!! I love how you keep them in character and yet keep the story so hot! Great work!! Keep it going!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on July 04, 2008
    hahaha kakashi kills me. i liked his advice to sasuke. Naruto's confused, you know what needs to be done sasu- baby. go get him!
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  • From ANON - megumi0505 on July 03, 2008
    awwww poor naruto has the hots for sasuke now, I love this story so far, i love how you try to keep true to their characters ^^
    now we all know sasuke wants naruto just as badly, but he'll be damned before he ever admits it :P
    i look forward to the upcoming chapters and possible lemons, you're good at writing lemons i loved the double team, that was so hot ^^
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  • From ANON - Rose on July 02, 2008
    I am enjoying this story a lot. The lemon scene was H O T! Now that I have my fangirl out of the way, lets talk about the story. I like the idea of Naruto trying to take care of Sasuke, and I totally agree to how he would react to that. I like your writing style-its simple, clean, easy to read, and visualize. I hope you keep the good work up and I eagerly await your next update.
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  • From Shikubokubo on July 02, 2008
    That has to be the hottest lemons I have ever read... great job, I'm still drooling!

    Any chance you could share the site you mentioned? (the one you talked about at the end of chapter 3 that described 'going to church')
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