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By : naturallymorbid
  • From serpensortia on May 04, 2010
    Ok i blame you for this very very very interesting and deeply moving and amusing distraction from my homework. -mutters to self- i really should know by now not to open an aff.net link that is emailed when attempting homework. ... Any way... I thought that your story was brilliant and extremely well written like you knew of the emotions that would come of such a situation. I hope to read more of yours in the future.

    Serpen
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  • From naracest on July 22, 2008
    Really lovely. Bravo. I was starting to wonder after the second chapter if the story was going to have any conflict at all cuz it was just so fluffy and sweet but then when you mentioned mizuki...You really did a good job. The writing was solid and...well i love Kakairu so you pretty much couldn't do wrong in my eyes. Congrats, it's a great piece. Hope to read more of your work soon.
    Cheers
    Meg
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2008
    great story!
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  • From solitare1 on July 22, 2008
    That was a great story!!
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  • From sweetciel on July 21, 2008
    Good story, but sex with no lube? VIRGIN sex with no lube??? Blood from tearing acting as lube? Harsh....sexy (for a rape scene), but harsh. From the flow of the fic, i was expecting a WAFFy lemon. Yeah. It was good (in a painful to read sorta way) but next time please let them have some sorta oily, slick substance. PLeaSE!!
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  • From writemenolies on July 16, 2008
    LOVE IT!! My only complaint is in chapter 2, 'prostrate' should be 'prostate'. Prostates are way more enjoyable than prostrate;) Other than that, marvelous, darling! (though I do tend to agree with the above reviewer about the blood and spit. With as sweet and considerate as Kakashi is being with Iruka, doesn't seem like sex without lube--especially for Iruka's first time--would even be an option)
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  • From ANON - anonymous coward on July 14, 2008
    Just a note: blood is not, not, not a good lubricant; someone being considerate would be sure to have actual lube (much more effective than spit) on hand, and take it carefully. If somewhat callous is the characterization that you're going for, then what's there works, although it would still hurt.
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  • From mourn on July 14, 2008
    Hello again. This fic of yours in going pretty nice, more since Mizuki is there now. Please continue writing more, and more now that you have a new character in your fic to make things even more interesting than they already were.
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  • From mourn on July 07, 2008
    Pretty nice
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  • From ANON - Air Castle on July 06, 2008
    This was great.

    I think it's amazing how you were able to make it so realistic and only in two chapters.

    Usually it would take at least 4 to 5 chapters to develop enough of a plot for them to say 'I love you.' But you did it in only two chapters. And the sex scene wasn't 'perfect.' It was almost how it would actually be in real life, especially for his first time. It would be painful, and it's likely that there would be blood.

    So I loved it. :D
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  • From charmpit on July 01, 2008
    I love shy!Iruka. Although I have read some good fanfic where Iruka was seme and handling Kakashi like he was a blushing, plaid skirt-wearing schoolgirl. Man! That's the stuff.

    They are so sweet in this. Hatake is simply too hot for his own damn good.
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  • From solitare1 on June 28, 2008
    Love it for sure. It's just so cute!
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  • From KareNeko77 on June 28, 2008
    Wowee! Very hot indeed!
    And a little bit edgy. With your description of Iruka's discomfort at this new activity, it made their consummation less of a sure thing even as their contact got more and more intimate. That made it more interesting (not that it wouldn't have been riveting for a yaoi fan anyway!).
    I liked Kakashi's confidence and expertise - understated just enough to be believable.
    I'm curious to see where they go from here and if there are any problems on the morning after.
    Very enjoyable reading!
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  • From charmpit on June 26, 2008
    I like it and I want to read more.
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  • From flameofthenight on June 26, 2008
    Long chapters. On a KakaIru! Yes!!! I like LIKE long chapters. Please keep giving me long kakairu filled chapters. And long story too please?
    Lol.

    Good plot.:)Like it.
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