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Reviews for Breakfast in bed

By : Carola
  • From sasquatchsnake on June 22, 2008
    Damn, the mood in this is awesome! It was so tender, yet impatient! XD I love the juxtaposition of novelty and routine. Call me sappy, but it felt real, like they were in love. I don't know, not a lot of people manage to pull that off. I thought it was cool.
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  • From ANON - Kuno on June 16, 2008
    Not good? Pish posh. That was yummy and endearing. I thought the whole scenerio was adorable, and I loved how your Sasuke basically grinned and beared Naruto's well-intentioned disasters with fondness. You were descriptive, and the story flowed very well. I also didn't feel like I was cheated out of anything when it ended, like I do with some oneshots - it felt complete. As a final note, I LOVE your(?) term: adorkable. What better way is there to describe Naruto?
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on June 11, 2008
    no, no, it's good. it's VERY good! Naruto was absolutely adorable about destroying breakfast (and sasuke's kitchen lol) then he went all sexy minx rrarrr!! Little things like saying naruo was still wet from last night just make the reading that much hotter *smirks* NICE.
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  • From KotoneHime on June 11, 2008
    No way it was great :D So cute I really loved it. Ramen after sex!! I'll have to try that sometime.
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