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Reviews for Gentle-Fist Massage: The Series

By : PrplGrl
  • From ANON - ohitsjordan on December 01, 2012
    I cried. A lot...
    I'm such a whimp.
    But it was a damn good fic!
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  • From AngelTalion on March 08, 2011
    For the records Icried midway and then at the end of this fic... I did to the point my husband thinks I'm PMSing. I enjoyed most of it. I just got fooled into thinking after the Shika suicide attempt and the smex that we would get something of a hapy ending... and yes there was closure but this was just... I need a chocolate bar to cheer me up from this... *sighs*
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  • From drivven on November 29, 2010
    I love this series and think you are very talented. Thank you for sharing this here.
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  • From ANON - Nana on March 02, 2010
    This was so sad, and at the same time so breathtakingly beautiful T.T
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  • From kuramasgirl on February 08, 2010
    waaaaaaaaaaah! that was so sad. poor shika but at least he got closer in the end. but yd u have 2 kill neji? i was crying since he died.
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  • From ANON - Shikeji on July 22, 2009
    Well I really like your title and the plot ideas, Clearly Neji could give the best massages in the whole village. I've only read the first part though. It was good but could have been better if the characters were more in character, they weren't wrong just a bit off for me. Your descriptions were good though and the explination of the massge I loved that. Can't wait to read the rest but I'm gonna pace myself to really enjoy it instead of reading it in one go.
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  • From Calcifer on July 02, 2009
    Aaaaaawwwwu That was beautiful. It's pretty rare to encounter a fic where one of the main characters dies and stays dead. While of course i was miserable throughout the entire 4th arc, it was still spectacularly written, and I'm glad that Shikamaru now feels the ability to move on.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~Angel
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  • From HavocTellenoi on March 12, 2009
    I was soooo mad when you killed Neji, but it turned out sort of okay for poor Shikamaru. It was terribly sad tho. And extremely well written. I do forgive for killing Neji, but still, it was sad and upsetting. In the end I liked this series tho. It was good. Emotional, eventful and I've run out of adverbs to define it with, so I'm gonna stop and just say Very Good Job and keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - pinklemonade on February 08, 2009
    Pink: how could you kill neji?! you big meanie!!!!
    Lemonade: (covers her mouth) don't listen to her, she loves it but her tiny brain can't process multiple pairings
    pink: (pushes lemonade away) i can too!!!!!!
    Lemonade: oh yah? what 2789 divided by 450 multiplied by 698 minus 289? huh?
    pink: (eyes starts to circle at the question) then passes out
    Lemonade: nice job keep up the good work (bows)


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  • From ANON - mississippi_brat on December 24, 2008
    omg ur story mad me cry at the end. lol now my sister trying 2 find out y im crying plus i have a cold so it sounds like i cant breaht lol. anyways love ur story:D
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  • From ANON - maboroshi638 on November 15, 2008
    Heya! I just finished reading the story. I just want you to know that I thought it was brilliantly gripping. I really feel for Shikamaru as I also lost a loved one recently and can understand what he must be going through. I liked how you made him move on in the story and not fall into total depression. It is always important to have a positive outcome to stories with such topics.
    Well, basically I just want to say "Well done!" I enjoyed reading the story from the beginning to the end!
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  • From Touya06 on November 13, 2008
    I remember reading the earlier parts to this series but I never completely read Life of Shinobi and didn't even start Night of the Dead.

    Well I was browsing stories and decided that I would finish this.

    I freakin cried my eyes out.

    I have not, before this, read a story where one person in an extended relationship ends up dying. I've read stories where the characters get together, maybe express their feelings but aren't together for a long period of time and then one of them dies. This story was a complete shock to me. I always expect those happy endings everyone writes, they get together and stay together, the end. Don't get me wrong I love those endings, I'm a sucker for a love story with a happy ending, but this. I loved that you put the possibility what happens in the "real" world. They're shinobi and they can die on a mission.

    I think you did an extremley awesome job with this, with the emotions and everything.

    Though Night of the Dead was very conflicting. Everyone wants that second chance and I loved that Shikamaru got his chance with Neji. But Neji was/is dead.
    It was disturbing and sweet and I just try not to think about those certain scenes.

    Overall awesome job!
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  • From ANON - Fate-Angel on October 22, 2008
    Amazing, truelly amazing. So much emotion was put into this piece. I love all your stories and can't wait to read more. I too am sorry to see this one end. Please do the oneshots you mentioned.
    =^-^=
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  • From hsosborne on October 21, 2008
    awww, it's a great ending
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  • From ANON - Sanee on October 21, 2008
    I was /this/ close to crying during this chapter. I honestly didn't expect to find Neji leaving Shikamaru to be so sad!
    However, I'm really glad that they had a sort of conclusion.
    This fic has been beautiful. Thank yuo for writing it.
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