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Reviews for Despair; Sub Rosa

By : Carola
  • From sasquatchsnake on June 22, 2008
    Holy crap, I got chills. Seriously, this is genius. Oh, man... That was GORGEOUS. Beautifully written, flawlessly streamlined... I love it. Love it, love it, love it. And the ending, with Itachi, was perfect. Hell, the whole thing was perfect!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on June 18, 2008
    No this was absolutely beautiful and so heartbreaking. It reminded of the part in the movie with the old couple lying in bed as the ship sank, really brought a tear to my eye. This was very heart-warming and well written. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kuno on June 15, 2008
    How is it possible? You actually had me smiling as they died! Thank you for making it more sweet than bitter; they were free, and it was obvious that they would have been miserable if they had "survived".
    Yes, I saw the good big-brother Itachi in the end. Cheers for Itachi!
    Actually, I'm really glad you didn't reveal Sasuke's previous lover. Very glad. Sometimes it just seems like a name drop, and sometimes it upsets my "He's Naruto's!" mood, but it almost always leaves me with a bad taste in my mouth.
    There may have only been one chapter left, but I'm satisfied. Everything was tied up so nicely, and now I don't have to suffer through a cliffhanger.
    You're very welcome on the review front. Thank you for sharing your story. Happy writing!
    ~Kuno
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  • From ANON - bb on June 15, 2008
    *Tears up* This story is the only story on AFF that's gotten me to cry, although not sobbing gusts of pain. It was well written for all of its history and the time period it was set in. I really liked this one. Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - bb on June 15, 2008
    *Tears up* This story is the only story on AFF that's gotten me to cry, although not sobbing gusts of pain. It was well written for all of its history and the time period it was set in. I really liked this one. Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - Kuno on June 12, 2008
    Oh no! They don't have time to waste! Make every moment count, boys!
    Ahem. So as I was reading, I just couldn't help but despair over their fate and the metaphorical clock ticking away. Why does Itachi have to be such a jerk?! Why must Sasuke be so close-lipped? Why must Naruto be so confused?!?! Of course, I wouldn't want it any other way - not really anyway. The conflicts are what draw me in and make me want to keep reading, for as frustrating as they are, they are also exciting.
    I’m pretty sure I know what Sasuke was doing that has his family so prepared to marry him off. The question, I believe, is who. *wink, wink*
    I am thrilled to learn that this story will probably be fairly short and updated frequently, but if that should change, I guess I’ll just have to get something prescribed for the heart condition I’ll obtain, as there’s no way I’ll stop reading now.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on June 12, 2008
    Thanks for the reply and I really did love this chapter, although Sasuke is taking a little long to let the cat outta the bag. Otherwise youve definately got me coming back for more. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From Dragon7 on June 11, 2008
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

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  • From Dragon7 on June 11, 2008
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

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  • From ANON - Kuno on June 10, 2008
    How interesting! Yes, I am one of those people who when she reads that a story will be a "death fic", usually just skips over it, as I get way too emotionally involved in stories. I also don't like to get involved in many WIPs as I hate to be left hanging (darn my emotions!); however, the idea of a Naruto and Titanic crossover immediately caught my attention, and I couldn't help but see how you were going to let it play out. I really enjoyed the first two chapters! I loved how you were able to parallel the similarities that are between Sasuke and Naruto in the anime/manga with the situation you placed them in for your story. Even though the circumstances are different, you made sure that Sasuke and Naruto share a common bond. I can't wait to see where else you take this story, even as I fear the ending.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on June 07, 2008
    wow, never thought Id be interested in a Naruto/Titanic spin off but its actually pretty interesting. Sooooooooo, Im keep coming back. Please keep up the good work and update soon K?
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