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Reviews for The Hunt

By : Anestshia
  • From ANON - violetpooka on May 13, 2014
    enjoyed the story a lot--though at first Iruka seemed a little like a cry baby---but i still liked it. Fight scene and ending weren't crap---they just seemed rushed..might be something you want to go back and take your time reworking in the future. If not, don't worry about it, it stands fine on it's own, and I'll take a rushed ending any day where at least we know what the writer had planned for the characters over an abandoned story!
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  • From morphingbutterfly on September 18, 2009
    that was a really great story....i really enjoyed it ^___^
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  • From RyuEarth on March 17, 2009
    well, I'm glad that you were able to finish it at least and they lived! =)
    And maybe you could make it up to us with more KakaIru goodness? ^^;
    Also, your smut is not bad!
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  • From ANON - deviltiger on February 27, 2009
    I love the way this is written. What a cool power you gave Iruka. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From Juniperbreezie on June 24, 2008
    Cool update. Wow, what in the world is that guy? How can he be worried about Iruka killing him if Kakashi couldn't?
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  • From Juniperbreezie on June 14, 2008
    I hope you do continue this story. I enjoyed reading it.
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  • From KareNeko77 on June 09, 2008
    Yahoooo, that was indeed a very hot chapter. I need a Gatorade. Dumped over my head along with the ice. Wow.
    If those ANBU aren't careful they're going to get quite an eyeful, popping into the bedroom like that just to deliver a message. Next time they should send me! Ah, the fantasy world...
    Great stuff!
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  • From leanne on June 09, 2008
    good story! look forward to more. :D
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  • From KareNeko77 on June 07, 2008
    Thank goodness he's been found, now don't let him bleed out while yer smoochin', Kashi!
    Looking forward to the *happiness*, and so glad for the twist...Iruka death is like kitten puppy and panda death all rolled into one! Ai!
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  • From RyuEarth on June 06, 2008
    yay! I'm glad that Iruka is going to be ok! (aka NOT dead ^^;;; )
    and *drools* yay for smut but take your time in writing/posting it, no problem waiting here =D
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  • From KansouAme on June 05, 2008
    Oohh so far so good. Please by all means keep going. You had me in tears and then hope again. Don't leave us hanging for long please!
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  • From KareNeko77 on June 05, 2008
    oooh, excellent twist, I'm hooked! More, more!
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  • From leanne on June 05, 2008
    Interesting.... I give you cookies for originality and I have no doubt that as you write more your skills as a writer will grow. A very fascinating read. :)
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  • From naracest on June 04, 2008
    Was that it? You did say it might be a multichapter. I hope so because i don't want Iruka to die. He was just wounded right? He gets raped ant then Kakashi helps him get passed it right? I hope so. If this is a multi-chap, keep going. It was good. Good plot. Nice use of OCs as bad guys. Good work.
    Cheers
    Meg
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  • From KareNeko77 on June 03, 2008
    Let's start off by saying that ending off with Iruka dying didn't say cliffy to me immediately (seems kinda final!); not until your author's note said cliffy - so now I'm feeling better and feeling the cliffy!
    But Iruka being hunted was tense and Kakashi's on the way...I'm no longer sure if Iruka is literally dead or not...yes, you have my attention! Looking forward to the next chapter.
    Very interesting!
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