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Reviews for Night, Day and Sunrise

By : CrimsonIris
  • From ANON - angel on January 13, 2011
    wow that was awsome .... please please update this storey i would love to read more and to find out what will happen next ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Zay on May 11, 2010
    Question! SO, after first admiting my only knowledge of japanese culture comes via manga and anime, there's something I've always wondered about. Could Sasuke adopt Naruto and Sakura into his clan, but not his family (obvious legal problem of incest)? That way, any child Sakura had would be an Uchiha, alibeit a bastard. And I know at least with old school european traditions if no clear lawful heir is available an heir can be designated, even if the person in question is a bastard or not closely blood related. If Sakura was adopted into the Uchiha's any child of Sakura's would be of unquestionable Uchiha decent and could simply be designated heir by Sasuke. If Sakura could not be adopted, then how about the child in question? Even if Sukura had to formally give up rights to the child to Sasuke, Sasuke could then recipricate by giving Sakura (and Naruto?) full power of atterney in absente over the child. I think either of these would pretty much avoid all the legal problems of the situation. Obviosly the social ramifications of would remain, but personally, I'd be willing to put up with a little social disapproval to be with the people I love. Oh, and if u haven't figured it out yet, I really like this story! Keep it up!
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  • From angelnomiko on February 28, 2010
    wow that was awsome .. love it and ihope they get to naruto in time to save him ... please please update soom i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From RosyPaths on November 07, 2009
    Kakashi was super cute ^_^ Perhaps there could be something about Sasuke's feelings and thoughts in the next chapter? Good luck with writing.
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  • From ANON - Shatter the Sky Comes Quietly on November 03, 2009
    We had a brush with C202 once, caused by our dryer. Those can be dangerous too. Pretty much anything that uses any kind of gas need a detector. Once the dryer was fixed our symptoms went away, and we later realized what nearly happened. We're much more careful now. Don't wait till something like that happens to you. Your friend was very fortunate. Most don't know what's wrong till they're in the morgue. Best wishes to your friend for a speedy recovery.
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  • From RichardH on November 03, 2009
    or just do stuff to prevent it, like start your car and move it a bit away from the house. this is what kept my family from getting the same treatment
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  • From roxnroll on October 27, 2009
    It seems Sakura is more alone now than ever. Poor Girl. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
    Rox
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  • From serenagold on October 27, 2009
    Gah! Another chapter and still no Naruto!! They need to find him! What will they ever do with out him. :(
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  • From daughterofvirgo on October 06, 2009
    I have really enjoyed reading this story. I hope Sakura and Sasuke find Naruto soon. But then you did warn that there would be character death so I doubt they will find him alive. But then, you might have some other character in mind that is going to be travelling to the great beyond. I doubt it's going to be Sakura since you don't write yaoi and she is pregnant after all. Anyway, I look forward to reading more of this story and I hope you update soon. Until then, great writing. :)
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  • From ANON - ChrystalStar on October 05, 2009
    Poor Kankuro! He's going to be so dissapointed. This story really has me on the edge of my seat. Please update soon! And good luck with that whole TA thing!
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  • From RosyPaths on October 03, 2009
    I liked Kakashi's musings, they were logical. But I'll cry for a week if you kill him. Kankuro was so damn cute in the latest chapter! Haa, got me smiling. Keep writing! I hope they do find Naruto, and I hope he'll live.
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  • From ANON - renae-chan on September 27, 2009
    wow just wow i'm amazed that you have everyone in almost perfect charater. and you keep me wanting more! btw love the smut that was awesome. i can't wait for the update! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2009
    Another excellent chapter, I've been following this fic for quite a while now and so far there's almost nothing I could criticize about it - though in this chapter there was. I believe that according to the manga and anime fire jutsu is inferior to water jutsu, thus making it impossible for Sasuke to use katon against Kisame... or am I mistaken? I'm not entirely sure the same goes for mist, since it's not exactly water, but still... Anyway, otherwise a very dinamic battle and also I liked the idea about Kankurou liking Sakura... now there's a ship I hadn't heard about, although in this case it's obvious that there's no chance for Kankurou to win her heart... with two others in it, that'd be too much! Hope to see more of Naruto in the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
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  • From serenagold on September 24, 2009
    Great chapter. Keep up the good work! ^^



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  • From RichardH on September 14, 2009
    newest chapter seems so rushed and short... it kinda made my and my guitar gentle weep
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