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Reviews for Slaves of the Maelstrom

By : Slyfer101
  • From ANON - Reaper4991 on May 11, 2016
    Huh, Naruto's orioke ninjutsu is gonna come in handy since he can do that as a real transformation
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2015
    I was liking it till the third chapter when it became pwp
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  • From ANON - Swagwell on June 16, 2014
    Love what you've done here, how many more slaves will naruto and hinata take befre this ends? And will you add the seven tails host to that list?
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  • From ANON - Swagwell on May 11, 2014
    Love what you've done so far, why not add konan of the akatsuki to the group or maybe kurotsuchi
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  • From ANON - Will on November 10, 2013
    Any chance this'll be continued?
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  • From ANON - Akuma on February 01, 2013
    Have the bells redesigned to affect others. If you continue this will we find out about the Taki girl?

    *Kid’s a natural lover,* she thought, *Too bad he’s too young for me…I’d give him a real memory.*
    Really hoping for some NaruAnko action. the age difference is like 10-12 years or so. Considering Naruto's life span not that big a difference.
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  • From ANON - Akuma on February 01, 2013
    Her new master wasn’t huge really, though he was certainly ‘above average’ for his age and size. His shaft was probably about six, six and a half inches long, and about two inches wide.
    Considering he is 12 than he is huge. 6 and a half inches would be above average for a grown man; for a preadolescent than he is a fucking monster.

    Hope to see this continued!
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  • From AkariTenshi on December 18, 2012
    Come on! I need an update or I'm giving up on this story!
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  • From ANON - Aina Flash Williams on December 10, 2012
    Dude nice but u really need 2 update ur stories including eyes of seduction except 4 dat u rock
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  • From ANON - nyhi on November 07, 2012
    Very good story cant wait for an update

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  • From AkariTenshi on July 20, 2012
    I'm getting tired of waiting for an update! Please update real soon!
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  • From mir-rcha on April 18, 2012
    Everything was good until Hinata began to turn into a T.I. mistress. OK, that was plausible and all, but at least not with Temari. The girl is too strong and proud, it was painful to watch her fall.

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  • From SSjDiizoid on February 26, 2012
    Fantastic. I really enjoyed the dynamic between all of the different characters, and I think you captured the personalities phenomenally well here. I've only finished the first chapter, but I will definitely be back tomorrow to start in on the second! Hopefully you'll keep writing more for this story.
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  • From Takai153 on April 15, 2011
    Please write more! This is one of the best stories on this site! It has great sex (though some more anal sex and use of jutsu during sex especially the kage bunshin wouldnt hurt) and the plot is rocks. I've probably read this fic more than 5 times now and I'm just dieing for you to update! I want to know whats going to happen with Koto. I want to see some sex with Yugito. More relationship development between Naruto and Sasame (and the rest of the girls). And I bet Naruto and Hinata's training to resist sexual torture will be so hot. I'd love to see Hinata make Naruto her pet and visa versa, but the thought of what Anko will do to them is driving me nuts with anticipation.
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  • From bloodshound on August 24, 2010
    if your still aroound pls pls update soon, this was fantastic

    i'd fave it if i could
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