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Reviews for Broken Wars

By : kitsunekyuu
  • From Noctrene on August 21, 2008
    I must have more. This is a great crossover and by far the best KHNaruto Xover of all. Seriously love the dark setting/theme you've got set up for it. Also, the reason for the Xover is a logical one. 'Roxas comes to envelope the world in darkness via Xemnas' orders and collect the hearts of the fallen' is a much better excuse than, 'Sora , Donald, and Goofy land on the Ninja world and precede to rape Canon! YAY! Lets all be best friends and have tea and cupcakes. LOL' NO!!! I can't take anymore of those damn things!!! You have have to continue this story. Please, I am literally begging you on hand and Knee. I'll even help Beta it! I'll draw fanart! Please, don't let the ONE good KHNartuto Xover die a premature death. There has to be someone out there that can write a decent Xover that isn't purely sex! You've got to be the one! Oh please dear god!

    Aside from my dramatics, I am completely serious. This story so far is well written, Dark, Unbiased, and for the most part well told. Aside from a few Plotholes here and there (Which I'm hoping you'll fill in later chapters. Please.T___T) This is very well done. I think it would've been a nice twist if somehow Naruto ends up dieing and becomes a Nobody. I'm sadistic like that, but I just don't get why no one has tried it yet, it's a logical idea. He has every reason to be held back by remorse or loneliness, and surely enough to manifest his own Nobody. But it's gotta be violent, and none of that crap about he becomes bestest friends with OrgXIII. Seriously, that just wouldn't happen. they hate each other why would they welcome him with open arms? Also I love my Naruto angst filled and I love your portrayal of Roxas. You made him act a bit too much like Sasuke for my liking though, I still love it.^__^ Please continue you have my full support!

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  • From ANON - Anon on May 26, 2008
    this story is good is this a yaoi story and will the naruto pairing be with some one in the naruto book or some one in KH wether it is yaoi pairing maters not. just add more soon.
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