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Reviews for Kiss The Rain

By : KogasAngel
  • From khalidadae on January 27, 2009
    Congratulations on another excellent story! I believe this is the first Itachi/Sakura I've seen that has a believable kidnapping scene! I don't think all the scene breaks in Chapter 3 were necessary. When Itachi was watching Gaara and Sakura's discussion, the scene break when you shifted to his POV threw me off a little. You paint a very interesting image of Sakura's childhood and the interaction between child Sakura and Itachi was completely plausible. I'm not a Sasuke lover, so the scene when Gaara told Sasuke that Sakura was more interesting was particularly enjoyable. I suppose executing Sasuke may have made me like it more, but that doesn't exactly fit the plot.
    The Akatsuki characterizations were interesting. Having Zetsu support Madara's Tobi act enforced the Tobi image in the others' minds. That was well chosen and beautifully orchestrated. The only thing that I question is Pain's characterization. He still feels a little off, like something is missing. This may be because you've shown more of the other characters and their motives. I'm not sure.
    If the above seems a little harsh, it isn't intended to be. I personally despise reviews that say "good job, write more", so I tried to write a more constructive review. In this case, that was very difficult to do because there really weren't any gapping problems. Thanks for posting such an enjoyable piece. Keep up the good work.
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  • From SecretQuill on December 30, 2008
    this story is so good! i love it!
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  • From Alpine02 on December 29, 2008
    Absolutely love this story.. Can't wait to see what happens...
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  • From CutieSakura on December 15, 2008
    This is an absolutely fabulous story! I simply can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
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  • From DewiSri on December 08, 2008
    Keep on writing! Im loving it!
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  • From MistressDragonFlame on November 27, 2008
    I like how you have Tobi in this; not completely Mandara all the time like I've seen before.
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  • From EzriCandy on November 17, 2008
    Ah! Welcome back! Its good to see you writing and updating again :)

    I actually read the update last night and passed out right after so I didn't get a chance to review. This was just another great chapter that, as usual, left me wanting to know whats gonna happen next! I love Inner Sakura's interruption of their moment in the Mangekyou sharingan.

    The whole investigation into Itachi's past, I really hope they find some information to clear him. I've always loved that sexy Uchiha and his bro really needs to know the truth. The part about Sai and Root, that was sad. -cuddles sai-

    Well, I think thats it for now. Wonderful job!

    Ezzie
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  • From Bratney on November 10, 2008
    Another amazing chapter! Keep up the good work!
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  • From Tricia1224 on October 16, 2008
    I am really enjoying this story. My favorite line so far is the Gian Smurf comment. Made even more funny by a personal joke between me and a friend. Anyway, there were very few grammar or spelling mistakes. I have seen more mistakes made by book editors. Anyway, I adore this story.
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  • From faerie99 on September 23, 2008
    I have always liked your sesshomaru/kagome stories-but this one is definitely on my top 3! Please update soon.
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  • From Bratney on September 12, 2008
    Amazing story! Please continue as soon as possible.
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  • From EzriCandy on August 31, 2008
    *ezzy's computer holds candlelight vigil for KA's computer*

    Been there unfortunately, but all mine needed was a hard drive replacement. my computer desperately needs to be replaced because its so old. I won't even tell you what operating system I'm running since its so embarrassing >.
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on August 24, 2008
    Thanks for the update intersting chapter as it held alot of revelations and promises of thimgs to come. I do hope that u update alot more faster as I am a fan of your other stories and I hope u keep up the good and and the new chapters rolling in.
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  • From MistressDragonFlame on August 20, 2008
    *snicker* gotta love how Pein hates Itachi.
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  • From mollyXmayhem on August 19, 2008
    I find this story amazing. Please update as soon as possible! I'm loving it!!

    ~~**Asagi**~~
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