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Reviews for Acting Upon Desire 2

By : AndrewPrice
  • From SirGeneralSir on January 25, 2011
    not a bad story, if you continue is i would recomend that you put the next part/chapter in this one instead of making a new post, it would make it faster for people to find the next part and so on.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2009
    ok your story isn't bad although it does lack a few details try adding what the characters are feeling and how fast or slow naruto is putting his dick in them is he going in fast or is he teasing them by doing it slowly.
    btw it might be a little hotter if you added some mild bondage a blindfold and a shadow clone or 2 too the next part in the series. so basically get a bit more creative and make the chapters a little longer
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  • From Shawndra on March 23, 2009
    It's about damn time someone wrote something original. I don't see enough or hardly any naru/hina/saku fanfics. I personly like this 3some the most, but it nice to see some naruto fanfics without that annoying sasuke in it. You have my full approval to continue this as a seris cause that was just hot......hot...hot.hot hot hot owww damn it it burns. Ideas......not sure but I've seen enough fanfics that this might turn into a harem. I like harems and all but please avoid that stupid idea of the CRA(clan restoration act) it was a good idea...before thousands of people input this element just to allow naruto with multiple women. Although, if I got the wrong idea and you keep this entirly lemon...hell go all out!

    With much respect,



    The Prince of Madness
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  • From darkxellos on September 23, 2008
    Very much at the same level than the first chapter. It could use a bit of brushing, but I like it well enough.
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  • From ROBnumber13579 on September 13, 2008
    Great story! I can't wait for the next one. Just keep doing more of the same and I'm liking you getting Ino involved. You may want to try geting Tsunade or Kurinai (sorry, my spelling sucks) involved.
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  • From nm1716 on March 17, 2008
    I loved it. HOT, HOT, HOT!!!! I would love to see this become a longer story. Tell next time.
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  • From shinemiru on February 03, 2008
    Wow, amazing! Can't wait for the next one with Ino joining them!
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  • From zero12789 on February 01, 2008
    ino was out side the whole time. she must be included in their sexcapades. please add her to the mix. but it was very good for your second naruto fanfic. please continue
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  • From DragonMan220 on February 01, 2008
    woah, nice follow up. I can't wait to see Ino get involved in the action. But after that, can the girls remember Naruto's Sexy no Jutsu and try having a female Naruto join in on the fun?
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  • From sarge on February 01, 2008
    thanks for making another sakura naruto hinata story. please make a 3rd one with ino soon and heres an idea what about the three of them dominating naruto or naruto totally dominating the three with 2 or 3 kagebunshins each girl. update soon
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  • From diadem15 on February 01, 2008
    more please, great story
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  • From GhostwriterMO on January 31, 2008
    And once more you create another great Hinata,Sakura, and Naruto story again THANK YOU!!! Ino hmmm...Okay I think I have an idea. Kage Bushins, Naruto using Sexy Jutsu (you know when he is a she "Naruko") giving Hinata and Sakura a lot of fun and playmates. And Ino gets grabbed by one when she's 'doing research' (hee, hee) Please keep up the great work cause I can't wait!
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