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Reviews for Sacrifice

By : Arigatomina
  • From WickedMoment on February 03, 2008
    I loved it! The plot is perfectly solid! Hahaa, the sex scene was hilarious! Oh Kami, I can so see Naruto just jumping right up and not caring if he was naked or not and he was so nice to Sasuke. I can't wait for another update, keep them coming long and strong! ... O_O Hmm, that didn't sound right....
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  • From dkf on January 30, 2008
    Awe, poor Sasuke. Thats a hell of a situation. I don't think I could -not- kill myself.

    I love this XB.
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  • From LindyStar on January 29, 2008
    Oh wow. This is fantastic! I especially love the line, "He was dead the same as if his father had slit his throat in their yard instead of patting his head." That was harsh and the contrast between the cut throat and the head pat was just, man, it sent shivers down my spine!
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  • From Jien on January 29, 2008
    Awesaome fic, update soon!!
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  • From bagelsan on January 28, 2008
    I love this! The boys seem really in-character, considering their vastly different circumstances, and I adore how you manage their interactions. Naruto as the slightly too-intense, privileged, stalker-type is such a weird but natural-seeming take on how his character might be if he had been raised as the son of the Hokage. And seeing how growing up with the Uchiha clan affected Sasuke is really interesting; I like how he is very loyal to the clan and dislikes Itachi even without the extreme provocation of the massacre, and despite the clan being a collective dick to him. Plus, I love the unsheltered Sasuke and Naruto, 'cause it makes the whole thing a little grittier than the relatively fluffy and upbeat canon. References to Sasuke's realistically horrible shinobi training = awesome.

    I really, *really* want to see how the Kyuubi and Itachi get involved in the story. (I suspect that neither of them is just going to leave the boys alone in slightly-nonconsensual happily-ever-after, and it will be cool to see if any further conflicts of loyalty affect Sasuke when Itachi almost-inevitably goes gunning for Naruto. 'Cause it's one thing to hate your brother in the abstract, and another to actively fight him the defense of a village/person that practically kidnapped you.) Not to mention Orochimaru; who knows what that crazy bugger could get up to? :p

    AU's are seriously my favorite type of fic, and all your stories are wonderful anyways, so I'm pretty darn thrilled to read this. (And I would not mind in the slightest if you updated really soon. At all. One bit. No pressure. Have a cookie.) ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 28, 2008
    great fic cant wait to see where it goes, i think naruto should be more posessive of sasuke though, hes been obsessing over him for years after all
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  • From Allys on January 28, 2008
    This story is so cute and psycho *dies* All the politics is kinda scary. The system you set up for the Uchiha clan. I think it fits perfectly with the absolute psychotic-ness of that clan. And the fourth is still around and kicking XD, I love Minato. How are you gonna swing the fact that Naruto still has the Kyuubi? Just curious. But I guess either Sandaime or Jiraiya, more likely, could have done it. They both knew the jutsu. Other than that I think it's awesomely adorable that Naruto is still completely obsessed with Sasuke. I wondering what's gonna happen with Itachi too. But that's more of a mild curiosity. Especially since you already said that you weren't gonna plan too much about the plot. The dynamic you said up with the boys again I love it. It keeps the them-ness of them, really well. I always loved how you portray the characters. They're different from in Embracing Dreams, which we both know I love, but they still keep that essence of them, the rivalry, the quarrels, the grudging affection, that I love so much about them. I love how your Naruto is so open and so honest about his faults and his expectations. It's awesome XD. I loved when you had Naruto describe himself as a fungus LMAO!!! That was the best description Ever XD *rolls* And you write Sasuke so freaking cute XD. He's so repressed, yet trying not to be... LOL, I can't describe it, but he's like this little tightly wound string. Taut and almost ready to snap, he needs to loosen up a little before he'll be any good for making music XD. Naruto of course will help with that. And the smut was hot and adorable and like a real first time. I think it's so cute that he felt like that about oral sex. LOL, I remember when my brother and I were younger he used to say that. He'd be all, isn't that gross? Who would wanna do that? I could never make a girl do that XD. LOL, he was so cute and such a prude when he was younger. He's probably still a prude, but I don't wanna know *snicker* I never had that problem. It'll be fun to watch Sasuke unwind *glomps u*. I think this is gonna be another amazing story. I'm excited XD.
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on January 27, 2008
    Aww I like this story! Smut was brillant, innocent, and cute. The first time is always interesting. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From Dragon7 on January 27, 2008
    Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.


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  • From Kyandoru on January 27, 2008
    Wow, great beginning! I like the way you portray Sasuke and Naruto. How did you come up with this setting, the clan leaving Konoha and all? Please continue?
    ja ne
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