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Reviews for Acting Upon Desire

By : AndrewPrice
  • From KdaAnimefan on February 05, 2009
    very enjoyable ^^
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  • From darkxellos on September 23, 2008
    I liked it. It could have been a bit better written, but it gave off a very sexy feeling.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on January 26, 2008
    I liked it. Are you going to add more? I think you have good potential with this story.
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  • From DJKDarkHunter on January 24, 2008
    very interesting story. Plan on doing any more of this series?
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  • From serenagold on January 23, 2008
    hehehe... it was like as the story progressed and the action got hotter, the grammar and punctuation just degraded more and more... writing too much hot stuff making it difficult to type? >:)


    hehehe. =^^= Over all, aside from some slight grammar issues at the end, this was well done. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
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  • From zero12789 on January 23, 2008
    hot hot hot hot hot, that was a very good threesome. it is very hard to find a good threesome/moresome fic. i would love to see a naruxsakuxhinaxino fic. that would be sweet. but please keep writing. this was a great start for a naruto fic. congadulations
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