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Reviews for The Dance

By : SumiHatake
  • From JiraiyasStudent on September 28, 2008
    Love the lemon! Good job. I'll definatly read more later! Great story!
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  • From BlackShadowChild on September 04, 2008
    That was awesome!
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  • From ANON - EternalEmbrace on July 19, 2008
    Haha, too lazy to sign in, too lazy. Finally finished reading this! *is proud of self* Awesome story, and A+ on the smut :D you are what I someday hope to be. Turns out, I'd read more of this than I thought before.... aaaanyway, I actually think its good you're leaving this where you did. Its a good complete ending, and adding on may actually make it lose some of its charm.
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  • From ANON - Anise on July 11, 2008
    That was (as always) seriously hot, I think all stories should end with a chapter of smut and the ending with Kakashi and his grandmother was cute! Another great story, I look forward to your next one ^_^
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  • From RyuEarth on July 10, 2008
    yay! i'm glad that this story is over and this chapter was so yummy! good luck on completeing your other stories, and extra luck on finding tobi/dei fics! =D
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  • From RyuEarth on June 21, 2008
    so cute!!!!! love the this chapter! =)
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  • From ANON - jazzy on June 21, 2008
    make me cry! so touching! I love this story so much! :D
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  • From ANON - Anise on June 21, 2008
    (7) I loved the idea of you giving Kakashi a grandmother, they tend to know about your entire life (with usually embarrassing stories) and at the same time have absolutely no trouble lending a hand if they think it will help you in some way, she's perfect! :)
    The conversation between the two guys was perfectly awkward with of course the usual misunderstandings but I was glad they finally worked things out because I don't know if I could handle much more of them pouting and moping about. Of course this means next chapter-makeup smex, at least in my little fangirl world that's what's going to happen, I can't wait for an update ^_^
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  • From NessSachiel on June 18, 2008
    more! more!
    it's really good story :)
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  • From leanne on June 09, 2008
    yay yay! A new chapter! dancingin her seat, wiggle wiggle of joy! :D Love this story so much! look forward to future chapters. Wish AFF had some sort of chapter-alert function so I know when my favorite stories have updated. :D Keep up the good work! :D
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  • From ANON - cally on June 09, 2008
    mew? im liking this....more please?!
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  • From ANON - Anise on June 07, 2008
    (5) Iruka really doesn't have a clue does he, which is always worse when someone's mad at you because your left just feeling lost. I'm hoping this next chapter helps with a little insight for Iruka, then he can figure out how he's going to make it up to poor pouting Kakashi. I look forward to the upcoming conversation and finding out who this person at the bookstore is to Kakashi :)
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  • From naracest on June 02, 2008
    aaawww. It is nice to have a story where Iruka is the one to mess it up. I hope you finish this one! it's really good! And there was promise of a happy ending!!!!
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  • From ANON - jazzy on May 28, 2008
    I love this story so much! Poor Iruka! Mizuki really messed him up. I hope you will be updating soon. I look forward to the next installment of chapters. :D
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  • From ANON - luxeflex on May 04, 2008
    one of the best kakairu fics I've readi n a while! My former obsession with this pairing has now come back xD
    wonderfully in character. Can't wait for the next chapter
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