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Reviews for Strip Sparring: Shikamaru and Temari's Rematch!

By : Jayrich
  • From TrackThisAssFace on December 01, 2008
    Damn, all the other shika temari stories are really lacking. You are our last hope and I know there are a lot of us out there. Write another or continue (or ill bite your head off) :P jk. anyways, you had a bumpy first chapter so e-mail me if you need an editor. ( a veteran beta here)
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  • From ANON - Jim Jefferies on October 17, 2008
    thats a fun story
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  • From Archfiend on June 14, 2008
    that was hilarious. Great story, lots of fun and a very nice sex scene though the use of their chakra and their respective jutsu was really funny. I do hope you`ll give us a few more chapters of this story, if not then I hope to see a story of yours ASAP, though please update
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  • From edelta88 on January 13, 2008
    nice ending
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  • From ShouraiChan on January 09, 2008
    LOVED IT! Temari and Shika for life!!!!! I LOVE how sexy Temari is! She's totally my idol, lol, j/k, but I kid not how much I love her character! Great job! Shika-Kun is so cute, always having to over-analyze every single thing, lol. Keep up the good work!!!

    ~Sho-Chan~
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  • From animekid on January 09, 2008
    oh man that was so funny

    temari was so evil and i loved the "Double fuck jutsu." Hahah this was a good piece. The lemon was exciting and didn't bore me, and it had the good amount of yummy humor and juiceyness to it

    part of me wants to see a sequel with Temari actually getting preggers O_o and both of them still fucking around!


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  • From roxnroll on January 08, 2008
    That was really hot. I enjoyed reading it.'
    Rox
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  • From animekid on January 08, 2008
    good start; i want to see some revenge! XD

    something tells me it's going to be a war and that Lee/Gaara/sakura/etc. might be involved in it
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  • From JasonBanks on January 07, 2008
    This chapter was okay. I will admit though, the story does have potential. I reserve my final judgement until the next chapter (if there will be one) Please update a new chapter!
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