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Reviews for The Mechanics of Desire

By : UbakeNeko
  • From JadedGothButterfly on July 28, 2008
    I Can't Wait For The Next Chapter.
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  • From ANON - Emily on May 20, 2008
    Tell me you will write more? I begging you, it is a good idea and one you should definitly keep working on. I love poor Hinata, it's kinda sad how her feelings mix like that, but, I like it. So, keep writing.
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  • From Tyko on May 14, 2008
    So far it is very promising. Minor spelling errors (I caught two). Please continue.
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  • From nm1716 on March 17, 2008
    I like how you are setting the story up. I can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From gordafarid on February 26, 2008
    Srsly! you should had continue instead of oneshot, there isn't enough team 8 fanfictions, especially threesomes!
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  • From ANON - SpawnofMorgoth on February 20, 2008
    Your story seems rather good so far. I can never find many team 8 fics, and finding a good one is even harder. I'm eager to see where you go with this, and sincerely hope you keep up with it.
    ~SpawnofMorgoth
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  • From ANON - mira on February 19, 2008
    oi! update this.
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  • From ANON - DowntownWoman on February 16, 2008
    I hope you're continuing this story. I love to see how Hinata going to get through this dilemma she's in with her teammates.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2008
    Okay, this is only the 2nd threesome that I have ventured to read. I LIKE IT! Okay, maybe because both Shino and Kiba are not GAY and into each other...at least so far! Finish it! Come on, you can do it!
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  • From ANON - Azu on February 12, 2008
    PLEASE update this. Kiba/Hinata/Shino is my absolute favorite OT3. I can tell this will be a fantastic story! :D
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  • From Labbess on December 25, 2007
    I love you. Now that that's outta the way...

    No, I'm kidding. I'm sorry, but when I saw someone with a WELL-WRITTEN KibaHina fic on HERE I nearly fell out of my chair in happiness. Go you. ^_^

    Hmm... You're right, it is a bit short. I think there should be a little more foreplay and build up. For instance, Hinata just looks at Kiba and then Shino leaves, and then sex. It's almost too easy. We're talking Kiba here. He's probably been teasing her all day XD

    Anyways, awesome stuff.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on December 24, 2007
    I liked your story!!! So I think it would be an interesting premise for a multi-fic. Can't wait to see an update!
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  • From Katsumicute on December 24, 2007
    oooh, that was hot! Great job ^_^
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  • From gordafarid on December 24, 2007
    Think this story is really terrific good one!
    It's a shame that there isn't enough good fanfics of KibaHina!
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