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Reviews for Choosing My Way

By : NightEye
  • From EJMartinez on October 30, 2009
    Thats a good way to end a chapter! lol
    Cant wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2009
    have naruto kill that mother f*cking bastard very painfully i suggest reinserting that stick then following it up with a rasengan thousand years off pain so that he shits pancakes for the next 5 seconds of his life before he gets
    killed as slowly as possible with kyuubi's youki (cos there is no way to treat youki poisoning if its done to a great extent.
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  • From ANON - The Night Angel on March 07, 2009
    So far an interesting fic. The pairing kinda makes a sort of believeable sense if taken in the context you've written. The lemon you was good albeit brief, and the second chapter was a bit short. That cliff hanger was just mean! You've done a good job keeping the characters personalities in check and making sure they aren't OOC. Over all, I think this is pretty good, but you should try to expand your chapters a bit. Keep writing, I cant wait for the next installment!
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  • From Anonymous7 on October 14, 2008
    Aw, it's been seven months! I love this story, so I'm hoping you still plan to finish it!
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  • From ANON - Reficul Tsol on August 12, 2008
    This is now one of my favorite stories. Well-written, good storyline, well-detailed sex scene, believable character reactions, and to wrap it all up, a naru/hina/hana pairing, which is now my favorite pairing. I was a little skeptical at first but nonetheless, I'm glad I started reading it. I am definitely getting my friends to read this. So keep up the great work and hope ya update soon...... Please update soon *begs on hands and knees* PLEASE!!!

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  • From shingen on June 23, 2008
    So far so good. It is a bit odd that Hinata would be so willing to share her husband with her sister, but it works. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Soujiro Seta on May 23, 2008
    I really like you Naruto story so far. You've done a good job of explain what the person is thinking or feeling at the time (a bit lacking in Hinata's case, but I can forgive that). Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter
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  • From ANON - spiritwolf on May 10, 2008
    So far I like this stor I just wih you would hurry up and update the story
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  • From ANON - Monkey's Uncle on May 01, 2008
    Love this story, hate the cliffy. Thought the pairings were interesting. Neji/Sakura and Lee/Tenten are new ones, everything else is played out. I would have put Shika in a threesome with Ino and Temari (because regardless of how troublesome it would be, he'd be the one to end up in the situation), and Chouji with Ayame at the Ramen stand. Wonder who attacked her, and what Foxy is gonna do to them. I also stand firmly behind the stance, that killing Jiraiya was hella lame, and the whole six bodies thing made Pein seem even lamer than Emo-spaz.
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  • From ANON - Ero-Bontenmaru on April 23, 2008
    I like it. Although the stories in this site are all for the smut, I like that Naruto is wondering how will he handle two wives instead of just jumping at the chance.

    Also, could you remove the author note, please? It has already done its purpose, and it's a bit disappointing to go for the next chapter and find that.
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on April 22, 2008
    Man Hiashi is asking for his ass to be stomped into the ground a mile deep and 3 tons of hell to be thrown at him... But why was Sakura holding Hanabi up unless her father was beating her like a dog.... I wouldn't stand for someone to beat my girlfriend or wife whoever did it will be in worse shape then her... Hope you update soon....

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  • From Aaronleach45123 on April 05, 2008
    Great chapter update soon.
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  • From ANON - Dr. Jinxers on March 31, 2008
    You want CC? Your grammar is very well maintained, yet you combine metaphor with slang... if you use slang, try to keep with slang... if you're using metaphor, stick to metaphor... it's not a pussy, it's her sweet sugar walls... it's not a cock, it's a thick-veined marble shaft... get the picture?
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  • From ANON - null on March 30, 2008
    Nice story, please continue...
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  • From roxnroll on March 27, 2008
    I'm interested. Can't wait to see where this goes.
    Rox
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