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Reviews for Vixens & Kitsune

By : archangelbloodraven
  • From ANON - on July 07, 2016

    whats with the first word of every paragraph being its own line?


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  • From ANON - tyler on December 22, 2013
    tayuya and kin please. i think we can all agree that if naruto could save them then he would. besides, the way orochimaru undoubtfully treats them, i doubt they stay out of sheer loyalty.
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  • From ANON - norris on December 05, 2013
    great story cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From SeerKing on March 12, 2013
    I like it. Keep the good stuff coming.
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  • From ANON - Degevorn on September 19, 2012
    Excellent story! Can't wait for more to come out. and I like the summon choices so far, so no complaints from me.
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  • From blukitsune on August 22, 2010
    very cool story! I can't wait to read more! (not trying to rush you or anything! I promise!)
    as for summons, here are my suggestions:
    Ino: Horses
    Hinata: Owls
    I dunno why, but it just seems to fit (to me, anyway).
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  • From blukitsune on May 16, 2010
    very cool! I like the plot progression, and the timings awesome!
    I noticed a few chapters back you mentioned not knowing Hanabi's age, and I remember in the anime (around the time of the chunin exams) Hiashi telling Kurenai that even though Hanabi is "two years [Hinata's] junior" she was still better than her. ^^; I realize that I am a nerd.
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  • From blackimperator on April 07, 2010
    Interesting story, the plot seems well thought and i'm looking forward to see it evolve. Tne hyuuga tea party will be fun to read.
    By the way, Ino's comment about sharing a shower, made me smile. I hope it was a prophetic one .

    A little criticism is the change of ino's behaviour. not that i mind the change itself, it's good to see her more confident , but i find it too fast. on a related note, i was expecting more reaction from her after naruto's speech about "his girls".

    To finish , i know there is little hope to see one day the sequel of that story, but reviews can't hurt and might even remotivate the author

    thanks for reading through my spelling mistakes ( english isn't my native language)
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  • From LCb4k4san on March 19, 2010
    Will you please come back? I want to read the rest of this story.
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  • From holyknight on January 10, 2010
    No Hope for you to return to the fiction working
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  • From garsdal on May 12, 2009
    ok, his bloodline chakra inflicts different responces from different girls, hinata seems to lose some of her inabitions, havent seen enough to see how ino responds. and tenten seems to get edgey (heh, weapon girl pun)
    but it also seems it attracts girls all around him as well. wich could mean that the bloodline more often gives a positive pull rather than getting people pissy.

    either i am spot on or a mile away, but it dont really matter. i like the story and want to see it finished.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2009
    ok good sotry but damn man hurry up with chapter 11 its been over 11 months since you updated. as for suggestions i suggest that naruto gets his tanks running a bit smoother in the next chapter and maybe have hinata accidentaly (hehe yeah right but she should at least make it seem like an accident) walking in on him in the shower and maybe she can't control her urges and joins him and they play around a little bit (not saying sex but at least a hand job for him and a fingering for her just to get things started on the whole hot scene)
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  • From spooksies on February 09, 2009
    hey there....just wondering if maybe i could convice you to finish with the next chappie?!?!?!

    laters! ~_^

    miko
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  • From WhiteWhiskey on February 08, 2009
    This is pretty good, I do have some questions, though
    1.When you say Tenten's summon will be dragons, do you mean eastern-style, serpentine dragons, or western, European style dragons.
    2.Speaking of summons, I do like having Naruto summoning foxes (even though I do like the toads as well, but I digress) with kyuubi as the boss summon, would she be unavailable, or could she be temporally summoned? If she could be summoned, would her summon form be stuck in fox form, or could she take her human form as well? And finally, would there be different types of foxes, with different numbers of tails, or maybe low-level kudakitsune (pipe-fox, a really small fox, sometimes as small as a mouse)?
    3.Would any summons have a skill to teach like the toads sage teachings (like werewolf Hinata, that would be kick-ass, and a phoenix sounds like a type of creature that could teach Ino something)?

    Also, as far as a fight between Naruto and Sasuke, I agree with you, since they aren't on a team together, and Naruto is not after Sakura anymore there is no reason for them to fight, the only times I can think of is during the chunin exams, or maybe during Sasuke's retrieval (and that's a bit of a big maybe, since, other than Sasuke being a leaf nin, Naruto has no real reason to go after him).

    I really hope you update soon.
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  • From demyroku on January 18, 2009
    very interesting storyline.can't wait to see whats next keep on writing ur doing great.i think ino's summons should be birds of prey instead of just phoenix's it adds verity.
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