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Reviews for Burn out Bright

By : spoon10488
  • From bloodyqueen on November 07, 2008
    nice chapter!
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  • From nyge98 on January 31, 2008
    Another great chapter. I always knew Naruto was smart and that was a great plan. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 26, 2008
    Alright Naruto! You go boy!!! But, what about the earthquakes? Hury with the next chapter!!
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  • From nyge98 on January 18, 2008
    I really like this story too, so don't give up on it yet. I hope you write soon.
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  • From Sinslayer on December 19, 2007
    this story is great so far....please continue it ^_^
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  • From serenagold on December 16, 2007
    Nice. I like how you've got Naruto utilizing his clones for more than just battle. Great chapter ending.

    Also, I just wanted to add (since its the first time I'm reading this story) that your last chapter (3) made me laugh my ass off. In addition to its humor, I just wanted to let you know something about that chapter reminded me of the poems of Izumi Shikibu (a Japanese female poet from 1000 years ago in the Heian period). What with the two 'lovers' connecting *ahem* under the light of the full moon, I just had to dig through my bookshelves to find my book containing her poetry and share one with you.

    Tell me this does not remind you of Sasuke:

    On a night
    when the moon
    shines as brightly as this,
    the unspoken thoughts
    of even the most discreet heart might be seen.


    (Beautiful poem, eh? Not quite something someone would expect their chapter regarding mutual masturbation would be referencing to, but it fits on a deeper level that would cause such an event to take place. The connection of lovers thoughts via long distances via the moon is a reoccurring theme within her poetry.)

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on December 15, 2007
    I like that Naruto, Sakura and Kakashi got to the weapon first! You really write Naruto in character and he found that room like the real Naruto would. :D I hope they can get the weapon out of there safely and I can't wait until Naruto and Sasuke meet face to face. :)
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  • From on December 15, 2007
    This is getting interesting. I laughed when Sakura found out the real reason behind Naruto's sudden act of genius XD Can't wait for the next chapter and good luck with your beta search, I'm currently searching for one as well.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 15, 2007
    Sasuke is there now. What will happen? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2007
    I feel so bad for those two. Maybe when they meet up, things will get better I hope. Please continue!
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  • From on December 05, 2007
    Oblivious dumb ass round three: Ok I think I'm almost done, sorry brain is a little fried with finals coming up next week. Thanks for deticating your last chapter to me, god how in the blazes of hell I missed that the first time around I will never know. Focus shai focus damn it!! Yep I'm done for now.
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  • From on December 05, 2007
    Hahaha, yeah I believe I said "there are a few grammer mistakes" and yet I wrote my instead of mine. I do believe I'm a hopeless cause.
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  • From on December 05, 2007
    Hey there babe, sorry it has taken me this long to review (I can be an oblivious dumb ass sometimes). I really like this fic so far and I'm glad you are continuing it. Your writing style in this story is a lot like my in Absence (scary isn't it). It's got a serious tone to it but with humour thrown in and I love it when fics are written like that. There are a few grammer mistakes (yeah I know it's like the pot calling the kettle black) but as a writer I'm always glad when someone lets me know because I completely suck at proof reading my own fics. Anyway I'm going to stop before this becomes long winded and boring, did I tell you I love this story (yeah like five pages ago, I know I'm exagerating again) ;-)
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  • From bluegenjutsu on November 12, 2007
    I'm enjoying this story and I think it deserves more reviews because it's great! I hope you continue to write this and thanks for sharing. :)
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  • From skyblueeyes on November 12, 2007
    ahahaha thats funny i like the duck thing
    i cracked up at that bit
    your good keep going and update.
    ja
    treasure.
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