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Reviews for Twisting Cords

By : Adi
  • From Reyn on October 14, 2007
    ...You mean I have to review AGAIN??? Adi, I barely review even ONCE and you're pushing me for THREE!!! (flops about cuz she's tired and her eyes hurt from such a long day)

    I laughed, I gasped, I drooled, I cried! (well, I didn't really cry) I HEART your smut!!! Wanna write mine for me? XD

    ...I still expect a follow up of french sex!!
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  • From Allys on October 14, 2007
    Hey sweetie, That was Hot and Sweet, like honey flavoured pepper sauce, LOL, sweetness with bite. I'm glad to see Sasuke-bastard is finally sort of mellowing out, XD. Although if I was Naruto I'd still have to kick his ass before I could fuck it, LOL *breaks out the whips and chains*. That was so freaking crazy!! LOL, no goodbye nothing O.O;; It was cute to see Sasuke jealous though XD, that's one of my favourite states for him to be in. I love tthat you continued this by the way! LOL, would have been here to review sooner but I reread the first chapter and was slightly distracted, LOL, you'll see what I mean *HUGS* I'm just happy your writing again! I hope you took some time to rest Love, Ja.

    LOL, I reviewed the wrong one so I moved it over XD.
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  • From Telpei on October 13, 2007
    Oh, Silly Sasuke, thinking he could avoid Naruto forever. Avoidance seems to be a typical Sasuke trait, but luckily Naruto is as stubborn as they come and never gives up. I mean, seriously, who leaves for a month without even answer the Blond Uzumaki Sex God's phone calls? They could have had some hot phone sex! Sasuke just wasn't thinking. Oh well. At least it's not likely to happen again... I hope... ^_^;; Great story, I loved it! :) Keep up the good work :)
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  • From llyoung on October 13, 2007
    Good idea to decide to post as a separate story. Still love the telephone cord bondage.
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  • From MoveThemHands on October 13, 2007
    That was amazing!

    YAY! Naruto got his pay back, and the phone cords were a great touch! But now everytime Sasuke will use the phone he'll have flashbacks and have to talk with a stiffy XDDD

    Excellent job! That doesn't deserve cookies! It deserves a whole mountain of desserts *hauls over mountain*

    Hope you slept well after this! Great job, once more.
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  • From marquesgue1 on October 13, 2007
    hina88 (Email Hidden) 2007-10-13 id # 3000094681
    Seme-sama!!! >.> damn right I refused to write it for you and see? You wrote nose-bleed material (as if you don't know that) but the thigh loving >.< re-read it three times since I got home just so you know. Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke, those thighs were made to be wrapped around Naruto *nods* heh

    Love that Naruto left Sasuke hanging for half an hour lol and the phone *drools* who knew phones could be so sexual (other than when being used for phone sex). I really liked that Naruto didn't let it go even though Sasuke did say he was sorry and Sasuke's saying that he'd missed Naruto made my heart melt, aww Sasuke - you're such an adorable pr*ck ^_^!!! It made me forgive him a little for having skipped the country (>.> not the smartest thing to do was it Sasuke?)

    Naruto's conversation with Neji - didn't stop grinning once when reading that loool :D 'Naruto - I don't care' aww bless ^_^ lol and taunting Neji is cool, i liked that he put his hand on top of Naruto's and that it caught Sasuke's attention and pissed him off that little bit more, it was another thing that helped to show that more of Sasuke's feelings towards Naruto even if he was a coward and ran away at first ^_^... but then Sasuke's well known for doing stupid things...

    I'll stop now before I get worked up.

    MORE THIGH LOVING!!! More thigh biting too... in the next one *whistles* ^_^

    Okay to sum the review up? Funny, hot, touching at times and IC which makes me want to publicly smex you cause IC'ness is the best!!!

    hina xXxx
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