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Reviews for Wide of the Mark

By : Hellagoddess
  • From malimillions on October 24, 2008
    Not to pressure you or anything, but... are you ever going to continue this... ? I hope so... it's a dynamite of a fanfic, and is really the cat's pajamas... ! And believe me, my praise doesn't get any higher than that! ^^
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  • From TaiKaiten on July 26, 2008
    i swear ive laughed more at this story than anything in my entire life... which is sad, since its only 7 chapters long... >.>
    please continue this story as well as 'shades of mystifications' if you will!
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  • From ANON - koryu on June 10, 2008
    Great job! Awesome take on an old plot, and wonderful characterization! NejiSasu is sorely in need of more people like you. Update soon - if you can, that is. XD
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  • From ANON - Fellanuwua on May 23, 2008
    Really hope you update, it has me very interested.
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  • From ANON - Timberfox on March 01, 2008
    This is very interesting. I can't wait for the next part. I wonder if any Hyuuga will use their bloodline limit to investigate this new girl.
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  • From ANON - malimillions on February 27, 2008
    I've read this chapter over and over again, and each time i read it, I'm struck again and again of how elegant it is, yet complex and oh - so - neji. Your characterization, again, is awesome! And I'm in love with your writin' ! : )

    And kudos for neji's plan, and plans of the future... also, that new estate, 'indigo lake', sounds wonderful.... Oh, and thank you sooooo much for not making Hiashi evil and demented and two dimensional and for not making him the original and inventor and only source of the Hyuuga curse seal.... I hate when fan fiction authors do that... >__< the man is strict, not evil. I'm actually quite fond of him, as you can tell, but... Thank you thank you thank you, again! : D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2008
    Its Uber Good Update Soon Please. I Like The Way You Write.
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  • From Ruffner on February 02, 2008
    boy is he gonna be surprised when he figures out it's sasuke that he's to marry. oh, i so cannot wait for the wedding to commence! Oooo, waiting on baited breath! I am!
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  • From ANON - Kokura on January 30, 2008
    Very interesting story; incredibly engaging, well-written, with the smallest amounts of typos and an original take on a sometimes-overused plotline. Lovely in-depth characterization, dear. Wonderful job!

    -Koko
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  • From ANON - malimillions on January 29, 2008
    Arr, matey... I know i've already reviewed and such but... Arr! *shakes a finger at you annoyingly* Ya better update at some point soon, ya scurvy dog!
    xD
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  • From Ruffner on January 27, 2008
    this story is rediculously funny and i cannot wait for the next chapter. please update soon.
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  • From oohshiny on December 03, 2007
    NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU you said you enjoyed writing this story on a review in meiun, right?? well, ENJOY YOURSELF MORE AND GIT CRACKIN'!!! also if your wondering how i knew about yer review, the review made me curious enough to look at this story. be thankful ta reviewing curiosity. and WRITE GRAHHHHH @_@ also email me whenever you update, plz. my email address is deannathx@comcast.net
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  • From ANON - malimillions on November 30, 2007
    Ohhhh! Oh my gosh! You updated! You updated! *Does a happy lil' goober dance* Oh, thank you so much! And wow... Your authors note made me blush and smile, thank you!

    And hmm... Things keep getting worse and worse (of course) for our lil' angst muffin, sassy-cakes... While i do like his plan of politely waiting until the bit of the marriage ceremony about if there's any objections, i still think he should have a backup plan, of course.... So he can better watch his lil' Sexy no jutsu'ed rump... Especially now that it IS a major problem of his chakra level being sooo damn low and drained, and him (or her, that is) being so tired all the time from the effort to keep that jutsu up, 24/7, that it might make any escape plans (if the speaking up at the part of the marriage ceremony plan falls through) really difficult... :( Then again, i -almost- feel bad that i'm rooting for neji here to get in sassy's pants.... XD

    Oh, interesting note about the name! It's a name that's dear to you, hmm? I'm sure there's an interesting personal story behind that, but never mind. It sounds pretty, and sort of classy, cute and elegant, yet sassy.... perfect for who sasuke's currently playing as a girl. Very nice!
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  • From antilogicgirl on November 28, 2007
    Yes, it's short, but still good. Nicely done, and keeps me wanting more, which is the point, yes?
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  • From Starspear on November 28, 2007
    OMFG. YESS. This is what I've been waiting for. Awesome way you've described Neji's personality. Oh god, please let Sasuke get spanked. I totally see it with that mouth of his. Please update soon. I like your writing style, I'm working on a story callen Meiun and would love to hear your thoughts.
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