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By : inediblefrogs
  • From morphingbutterfly on October 03, 2009
    i really enjoyed that story...you did an excellent job on it....loved your A/N about it being shinobis gone wild...lol...
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  • From ANON - Lem Lem on January 25, 2009
    I'm really really impressed! You made it hot, you made me care about them, and you made sure we knew who was doing what to whom, even though we were dealing with four people with the same pronoun ;). I don't think I've ever read such a good angst/porn mix.

    Love,
    Lem Lem
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on March 28, 2008
    I'm not sure why you hate this piece, I think it is exceptionally well written, full of many layers of emotions and a important key part of the series of stories, I really do love this one... the sex is better in some of the others but this one has the depth of emotion that draws you into the story. Yes, it's sad about Sasuke's feelings but it's a key part of what makes this a very good story and expands upon the relationship between him and Kakashi in a way that brings the whole storyline together! I have read this story, and the rest of the storyline, many times and love it. You should be proud of this story and the great writing skill you have.
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on February 03, 2008
    Yes it ends sad for Sasuke... but I think this story is perfect that way, it fits into the drama and complexities that Kakashi is a key player (or cause) of. Perfect, you say they don't have a plot... but they do. Thank you for another fantastic story.
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  • From Hestia on November 23, 2007
    Oh, god, I'm so happy for Sai and Yamato, but so sad for Sasuke, Iruka, and Kakashi. Good lord, what's next??? I must go read more and find out!!

    The glove fetish thing is fascinating!
    This whole thing was really incredible.
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  • From ANON - Kattmad on October 20, 2007
    Pooor Sasuke...*sob* I swore that I started to read this story before...maybe my ADD kicked in and I got distracted from the last chapter? Because *hides face from Shikyaku in shame* I sooo have not read this before. I so now get what happened in "Best Laid Plans" now...
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  • From ANON - Kattmad on October 20, 2007
    CORUPT Kakashi!!!...poor Tenzou, just cannot compete with that onslaught...little Sai is HOT...Shikyaku is HOT...I just don't know how you could think this was unworthy! I know...not enough of our cute selves in it to keep your interest
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  • From ANON - Kattmad on October 20, 2007
    *GUH* Yours is porn with a plot...the long history behind these people give depth to your stories like no other
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  • From ANON - Kattmad on October 20, 2007
    "and who the FUCK put so many rocks in this fucking field? Nothing made Yamato angrier than stumbling over rocks"
    ROFLMBFAO...poor Yamato...I sooo think you hit a characters quirks right on the head


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  • From cynaga on October 10, 2007
    Oh, yes. This is good on so many levels. Of course smexy as hell. But I enjoyed the whole underlying "argument" for monogamy so much also. The personalities were well defined and fascinating too.

    I can't believe you kept apologizing for adding chapters - the length is just right!
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  • From Sendrine on September 22, 2007
    Shikyaku I am absolutely loving your stories! You are writing superbly and I cannot wait to read what is going to happen next, especially to poor Sasuke. I really like the bond he had with Sai and that they were able to share something special together. The end of Yaoi_is_my_antidrug's story was just so sweet and touching and I felt happy for Sasuke! It was so emotional when he had to let Sai go and was then left alone in his grief. Deep down I am hoping Sai weakens and breaks this sudden promise of exclusivity because Sasuke+Sai was really hot and kinky..I love how they look alike haha, and also I think that he really considers Sasuke to be one of his special people on more than just a friendly level.

    Anyways, Sasuke deserves some happiness and I am hoping it comes along in the form of a certain sexy, sun kissed, blue eyed, ramen loving, noticeably absent blond but I can't help it, he's my absolute favorite! Keep up the good work and thanks for the awesome stories, you rock!
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  • From LindyStar on September 21, 2007
    Uh-oh! No more play-time with Sai for Kotetsu and Izumo or Genma or Raidou! That was a hot piece of fanfic, if I do say so myself- I love the glove kink!

    And this:
    Sasu: "Let me go"
    K: "I can't"
    S: "Then let him go"
    K:"I can't. I won't"
    S: "Figure something out."

    OMG! So sad TT_TT I can't tell you how much I'm loving this. What will happen to poor Sasuke? And will Kakashi learn that you can't have your cake and eat it too? (If you haven't read the story 'Hating You' you should, it's got an awesome tea and cake metaphor in it!)
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  • From LindyStar on September 21, 2007
    Yeah, reading the stories in order definitely makes sense now. So, I love the whole education of Sai deal, that scene in the woods is so hot! But I must say, in this chapter, Kakashi is my hero:

    "What do you want from me, Sasuke? What do you want, that I am actually capable of giving?"

    ..."That's the problem for both Iruka and myself, isn't it. How very little you're capable of giving."

    "I've been more than patient with your demanding bitch mouth this evening. Here's what I'm capable of giving... And I know for a fact it's exactly what you want to take."

    and

    "No. Sasuke will do it. Sasuke who wants to be in control of all of us one minute, then have us believe he's a powerless victim the next."

    Those lines just seem to hit Sasuke and his relationship right on the head; I really like KakaSasu and also KakaIru, and it's heart-clenching to see them pitted against each other, with Sasuke wanting Kakashi, knowing Kakashi doesn't want him the same way, but being unable to stop wanting him all the same.
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  • From kakashizgirl on September 16, 2007
    Oh, wow. How sad. Sasuke is my baby. I hate to see him sad, but that's life when you're involved with someone like Kakashi, right? My daughter absolutely abhors Sasuke and I can't understand it. She thinks he's such a bastard, and I'm like 'yeah' but look what he's been through. Poor baby. Very well written and I can't wait to see what happens with Sasuke. (I hope he gets some much deserved love at some point--I mean I like Kakaruka and all, but Kakashi just 'belongs' with Sasuke) that's just my silly opinion. You are a master of the written word and I am looking forward to all your future works!
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  • From Jayderaven on September 15, 2007
    I love all of your stories! Can't wait for the next one!
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