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Reviews for Riding the Elevator

By : Adi
  • From sunlight159 on August 01, 2007
    That was an amazing story. The relationship between the two was protrayed incredibly. I like how you also protrayed the characters. There were real human qualities to both that made them seem as if they could be anyone you know. Sasuke showed weakness and irrationality within his stoic demeanor while Naruto showed maturity underneath his "idiotic" personality. Well done!
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  • From ANON - BlackHawkDown on July 31, 2007
    Very well written. It was so wonderfully angsty.
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  • From 1yaoiluver on July 30, 2007
    I Loved it!!!!!
    Sasuke's emotions are so troublesome XP

    This was a great one shot!!!!!
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  • From UchihaSasuke on July 30, 2007
    It was so good! Yay! *sighs and blushes* So I can't wait to see what else you'll write next.
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  • From ANON - Akaolumik on July 30, 2007
    Wow. That was bloody fantastic! Seriously. I thought it was so believable, naruto and sasuke were right on! I love you forever for this lol. Yup I thought that the added scene added a lot more depth to this short piece.... making it less 'Sasuke's being an ass again' and more like 'Damn that dude has serious issues'^^. Would you ever consider doing and multi-chapter fic based on that dysfunctional relationship?
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  • From ANON - narutos_only_sister99 on July 30, 2007
    i love this story, it's awesome!
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  • From Trollmia on July 30, 2007
    If I ever could have been a little fly on that elevator-wall.... *yummie* And my dreams would have been complete...

    You have made this little AU-thingy into a perfectly believable story. The bickering tehy have is just like the bickering they have in the first parts of the manga/anime...

    Really - a very good job.

    Come up with more like this one in the future and I will be your humble reader/reviewer...
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  • From ANON - mr. L on July 30, 2007
    holy crap...that was soooo dramatic and cool....thanx
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  • From hisoka on July 29, 2007
    thats sad,he could have told him hed always be there at least in his heart.
    bringing the realites of life into a story nice work
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  • From ANON - PansyLane on July 29, 2007
    Wow. It's a very nice story. I've read the other story too, that was hot and sexy. It was sexy too, but the ending and the mood all along was very catching and lovely. I like your writing style. ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2007
    While I'm logged in, can I just reiterate how much I freaking love this and Riding the Tube... and I will nag you until they end up doing the deed and Sasuke gets over his angsty self or... at the least Naruto says 'fuck it, I'm done'. Must. Have. Resolution.

    Lovely dear, absolutely love it. You write the best angst in town.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2007
    so cute
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  • From ANON - Raining Firefly on July 29, 2007
    The ending made me tear up. I didn't even notice till I checked to see if there was more, but then my vision blurred. I hadn't realized that Sasuke's vulnerability throughout the fic had touched me so much. I have read your other works, and quite enjoyed them, but I don't normally review stories I read. I don't write fanfiction myself, so I don’t really feel like I have the right to criticize and/or praise a medium that I have no experience in. However, in rare cases, such as this one, I feel it is my duty as an avid reader to offer feedback. I'm not going to say Sasuke's totally IC, because he's not, but personally I love the way you have taken his weaknesses and inner struggles and emphasized it for your Sasuke. His desperation is just heart wrenching, and Naruto's drive to chip through Sasuke's defenses is also beautiful and sweet.

    I know you said you would never write angst again, but I don't really consider this all that angsty because parts were heart wrenching (as I said above) but not depressing. I really, really like it and I really hope you consider writing more pieces of this style, or at leased more in this series. ^_^
    Raining Firefly
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  • From kaesaku on July 29, 2007
    ooh, liked this as well as your first fic!
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Vibribi on July 28, 2007
    ::falls over in a puddle of tears:: So frustrating... and painful. But Jiriya, oh hohoho.... but... their relationship here is so hard and not perfect and sad and real and.... and now I need fluff. NEED.
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