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Reviews for Unrequited Bliss

By : Adi
  • From kaesaku on April 12, 2008
    goodie!
    i like your oneshots!
    do you have this on ff.net?
    or at least any other way to alert me once you update? :)
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  • From Gwyllion on February 04, 2008
    NooooooOOOoooOOoo.....you kill me now....the anger and tension I feel here. *kidnaps them* You can't touch them anymore ya hear? *runs in panic* O_O

    I love you tho Adiiii.
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  • From Allys on November 26, 2007
    Um, No. You should totally keep doing it, you write some amazing angst when you do. And they're strong they can take it. That was... Damn Adi I'm not sure what that was but it was really freaking good. *Glomps u and humps* Wish I could take all your stress away, but I can't even log into y! I've been kicked into the living room cause of renovations and so I'm trying to keep my computer time mostly PG. Thank God nobody in my family is bold enough to read over my shoulder. *Hugs* Exams can't last forever *chuu*

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  • From NaoAngel on November 26, 2007
    OMG Adi, I so freaking loved it you have no idea. I've always thought that you were more into funny stuff but that totally blew me away, WOW, just WOW. I love it to bits and you so should write more angst. lol. even though WE KNOW THAT ADI is cool, you should focus on angst *nao's advices rule ~* rofl. so yeah. i found it extremely erotic how naruto was trying to make sasuke kiss him back and they were doing naughty stuff at the same time. omg, fantastic. MOARRRRRR. i know it's a drabble but i want more. excellent work XD narusasu all the way baby. heh.
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  • From ANON - sadistickiss on November 24, 2007
    Omgoodness you're amazing O_O. This was such a beautiful piece. It made my heart do flipflops T_T I really love it XD You always suceed in creating a perfect Sasuke with a persona neither too submissive nor too dominant. I loved the end scene best XD

    You write good smut. I give happy happy XD.

    Amazing job as usual! Thanks so much for writing and posting up for us to read. It's always a pleasure to read your work Adi XD!
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  • From ANON - SaintAlecto on August 29, 2007
    Forgot to add my email address and meant to say, "Were you foucusing on anything in particular..."

    I hate typos... GROWL.
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  • From ANON - Saintalecto on August 29, 2007
    OH MAN! Another perfect 10! And see? You can write in the nijaverse! It's was wonderful and hot. I liked the style- it was choppy and raw and melancholic-- I loved it. I read all three chapters, but I could really identify with Redemption. *Sigh*

    Favorite line was this:

    He didn't get further than the door step though, sitting there with his elbows braced on knees, looking at the stars and wondering how he always got it wrong.

    I imagine that is what it is like to live with a manic depressive. Where you focusing on anything in particular here or where you just trying to portray angst-ridden Sasuke?

    -SaintAlecto from LJ

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  • From Touya06 on July 31, 2007
    I'm enjoying the story and look forward to when I can read more, but I want to make sure I'm understanding this correctly.

    Sasuke and Naruto are in a relationship but Naruto isn't participating in the relationship like a person should be and Sasuke is trying to hide that fact from him because he loves Naruto...?

    Hope you update soon. :p

    -Touya06
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  • From Dragon7 on July 25, 2007
    Grate chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.
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  • From KageKitsuneXXX on July 24, 2007
    I can't leave you for five minutes and you aren't running off writing angsty butt-secks! Whatever am I going to do with you? Well since you exams are done *I think*? Butt-secks away!!!
    I liked this one as well, you angstiness deepens. In a few months you'll probably be doing hardcore D/s. I need to keep an eye on you! Now get to work on your outstanding lemon homework!
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  • From Pho on July 24, 2007
    Aww, these are so pretty and angsty. I like them, I think you do a good job of writing angst. Yes *nods* I am pleased. I especially liked the third one, I think it's my favorite so far.
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  • From marquesgue1 on July 24, 2007
    It was good, that serious element that kept it from being a smut drabble - although hotness was clearly present heh XD

    Liked it ^_6
    Hina xXxx
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  • From Zrina on July 24, 2007
    You snuck that one up on me!! Was really nice, liked the smexiness of it. Interesting that the expression of love makes Naruto weaker like Sasuke always spouted, but I think it makes Sasuke stronger, though. For him to go to those lengths to protect Naruto shows his depth of emotion. Especially since poor Naruto would probably swear off the smex if he knew how much he was hurting Sasuke.
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  • From ANON - Mikra on July 24, 2007
    And here I thought he was twisted and cast a genjutsu so that it would seem like Naruto WAS hurting him and in reality he wasn't. Oh well.. maybe I'm the one that's twisted up in the head.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 24, 2007
    its kinda sad but it is cute
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